|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Outstanding imagery enriching contents of poetic beauty
"Walking the Illusion" of a dream. This is a flower from
the poetic garden to scent the mind of the readers.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|well Penned Walter
|Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
|Walter, this is simple fabulous. A pleasure to read it first thing in my a.m. -- and a pleasure to have made your acquaintance.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Very profound write. love the descriptions.|
|Reviewed by andrea coltman
|Wonderful poem, Walter, the last stanza is fantastic...best wishes Andrea|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|If pillows could talk (or write), Walter. Thank you for sharing this offering. Well done. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
|This has some gorgeous lines in it:
"When destiny becomes a whitewash
and lips liquefy resistance"
Ha, you've captured it beautifully,
that abstract of emotion that
floods the senses. As I said above,
the whole poem is gorgeous and one
to be proud of!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|This sings with a mellow mysticism and a wonderful musical rhythm in the irregular lines: loose jazz! This seems a scented write, somehow, and leaves the fragrance of the "waking dream"-like qualities you evoke so well. The imagery is unique and beautifully detailed and sketched: this has the sharp versus "smudged" definition of a water-colour painting you could look at for hours. Don't mind me: some days I am more lucid in my comments than others, but I hope you get the drift of something I have written here... And welcome! The natives are friendly! :)) TY Kate|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A truly marvelous poem, Walter.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|exceptionally well defined imagery ... great write ...|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
It is here I am found.
Translucent in slumber,
opaque in the waking
with morning tears
sketching my pillow
..OMG ..I love this last stanza..chills down my spine..superb!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|You're swimming better than Mark Spitz.
Great word pictures, brilliantly detailed, the last stanza is clever, and true.
Welcome to AD town..
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Reading your words is like swiming through molasses. Nice and slow and sweet to the tooth. Good.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Beautfully expressed Walter!I love the last stanza!
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|Excellent write... living with dreams is a worthy goal, walking with illusions can be exciting...|