|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|What were you sniffin' boy?
Only you could make this readable.
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Old maybe, but very moving according to the reviews below, so why not just add to the collection with new styles and keep this one that works so well. I am in agreement with those below...wonderful.
I also just read your bio and found it very interesting as well. Love the attitude. Anyway, nice to be reading you. Trish
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|This may be an old style but I like it!!!
Excellent poem, Walter!
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
"Dare it breech the unspoken
the forbidden sin
Dare it? This is a superb write. As for this being a reminder not to write like this, has the change already occured "within" is it in the process? or are you hoping? I only say that, because I believe very often, we write "in the moment" of our emotions :) Thank you for sharing this superb poem.
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|YikKkkkes, Don't YOU dare- *( Unless you find good reason, that Supersedes my thinking) change your style! This is a Powerful and Feltful and DEEP writing- Makes you put your thinkin' cap on... and Keep it on! I loved it- really---- This part-(purpose is clouded in the mists of
yet it beckons for release
before the executioner sharpens
his last blade)
The whole poem grabs ya'- Thank you 4 getting it out- Lady,Sheee
|Reviewed by Letitia Blount
|Great poem and style thanks for sharing.
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|Excellent write, Walter! Love the style too.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Fruit for thought. You're right.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Np matter the style...this remains a bloody good poem!!
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Shreded Is Fabric Of Freedom(Freedom Of Speech) Within...
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I don't know why you'd want to abandon this style, Walter. It seems just fine to me. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|i feel the same as eileen, why abandon such great style..experiment sure but this is great form|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Why would you want to give it up, Walter?
This is vivid imagery and tells a potent story!
Blessings to you,
|Reviewed by Antoinette Kopperfield
|I feel a sense of despair along with a powerful release of emotions. Not so sure you should give up this style. It is thought provoking with much imagery.
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|"Let this be the epitaph
When the breath of life
blows out the last flicker
before it is light once more
free to express what is within
and will always be" < < < < < < < < < <
When the editing is completed, this poem will be
a top on the list poetic grand.
The last stanza is a golden one.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|What the . . .|