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My Answer to Michelle R Kidwell's Challenge by Edward Lupinacci Thursday, July 07, 2005 Not rated by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan Everyone who writes, writes for a reason my challenge to you is this try and explain why you write, what made you start writing. Will you accept the challenge?

It all started on a bright and sunny day My Mission: Sky diving To test that new space age pen that is suppose to write upside down. Equipped was I with the 3 P�s Pen, Paper and Parachute I stood by the door ready to take that fateful leap First surrounded by metal then just air and sky The adrenaline pulsing eager veins The wind buffeting the jumpsuit almost made me forget my purpose As the ground approached I wondered what I would write Pause, 2500 ft � 2300 ft � 2100ft "My thoughts at this moment That�s it " Decent of man Happens without substance Nothing to stop the plunge �Hey this is good I think I�ll write more� Second stanza began to flow 1800- 1600- 1400- fate is our enemy or ally it all depends on our first step �Yes I am liking this poetry stuff� third stanza came into view 900-700-500 It is all about perception observation of outer stimuli Being Aware "ok now a Title I�m really into this I just need to think without distraction and I will be done Title, Title, Title, Title" 300- 200- thud- splatttttt Oh well I guess I�ll have to wait for my next life to be a poet

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Reviewed by Linda Hill	9/28/2005

This is creative work, Walter. EXCELLENT!!! You have a vivid imagination, and that is what it takes to be a good poet! ~Linda




Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G	7/8/2005

YOUR Funny LOL... I love your style and your way of expressing YOU! Keep it UP Mr. W--- and I have to go back and re-read this again- your wording - your ideas- a Challenge huh- I write from out of the blue I say What my heart wants too- I hope to inspire someone 1 day By expressing what they want to say! I will do it in litery form- Since writing has always been my NOrm- Hoping to reach the young and Old With something that can be shared and told. It's something quick-Thanks for the challenge... sounds like 1 of my Older poems/ramblings..... Many HuGs- Lady,Sheee




Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	7/7/2005

This is another excellent write, keep them coming God Bless Michelle!




Reviewed by Jennifer Ragan (Reader)	7/7/2005

A very amusing and creative poem:) Jennifer




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	7/7/2005

Nicely expressed, Walter. I'd be too afraid to jump I think. Love and peace. Regis




Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)	7/7/2005

What fun! I felt myself falling with you. Delightful way to write a poem - but next time - open the chute! (grin) Danger of being a writer, so busy writing we forget to pull the cord. Monette




Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK	7/7/2005

I Wouldn't Call It Challenge It Doesn't Make Thud Sense! TRASK




Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner	7/7/2005

Walter! You are either the bravest soul I've ever read, or the craziest...WHATTA WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! YOU ROCK! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) Amid the tears that the London bombings have brought, thank you for the smile you put on my face--glad I dropped in :) LOL




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	7/7/2005

Man I liked what you did plunging down!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Peter Paton	7/7/2005

A comprehensive reply to the challenge You meet all the requirements with panache and style ! Peter




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	7/7/2005

WOW!! You are CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZY, man, but this is one hell of a challenge response! Good for you! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D Me thinks I will keep my feet on solid ground, thankyewverymuch...as my daddy always says, "Why jump out of a perfectly good working airplane??" And it is true! LOL




Reviewed by E T Waldron	7/7/2005

Walter this deserves a prize! You are a brilliant poet, and a joy to read!oops should I say you were;-)lol love the humor! Eileen




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)	7/7/2005

Now, THIS is unique in answeing the reason why you write. Yuk. Yuk.