|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
|Have love in site...is sometimes all we need.
Finally I see the eyes I have seen for a thousand years
to the obelisk where it is kept
I let myself be filled with it
The energy coursing
My heart filling with it
So I may bring it back with me
It is the only vanguard
that will defeat the nightmares
And protect the sanctuary
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Bless you for such a beautiful write. Enjoyed reading this one.
|Reviewed by J M
|Greed- Envey- Pride- And Power this is powerful and holds deep destroying thoughts and the insanity of trying to hold onto life as it was once peace, tranquility, but Love has many faces and many ways and not all are loving,. This one conjures though to look deeper into this poetic offering. No chewed in one setting. Blessed Easter Holiday,
Thank you for penning this one..
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|As always such a pleasure to read your issightful work!!
Happy Easter to you....and Gumby!!
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|"Greed, Power and Envy
have undermined the principles once held dear"
Indeed Edward - these three are surely the most vile of the leviathan that manifest this planet in spirit and corrupt the souls of those that worship at their thrones.
Your masterful insights make this poem a powerful vision inundated with spiritual awareness' that speaks of the need for all men to find the Truth and peace.
Fantastic image ...
Light and Wisdom ...
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
On This National Poetry Month, it pleases me to join all the readers by this table of "Love" ~ feed my mind, proud my soul and polish my creative tools ~ through the magnificent lines of this poem that adds value to Poetry enriching THE AMERICAN FINE LETTERS.
I salute You, Poet.
In gratitude and reverent admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
|All that and love too...the image is fabie and the angst of
today verses yesterday and love and life and the lack thereof
rings throughout this piece.