|Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
|Ed, this is your best! Outstanding!!!!!|
|Reviewed by Southern Comfort
|So intense and spellbindin! Through yore words, I experienced the emotions of this man! This was a wonderful write! SC|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|I surely hope he will! Beautiful pen, such tender and exciting memories.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most interesting.....you may have the tea....I will go crazy Without my coffee!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|It's so true we get a taste of the heights and if it isn't sustained we seem never able to accept anything less...
Good to see you Ed;-)
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|A great read. Too bad about the coffee..
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Reviewed by Cedric III
|He [starred] at his cup of tea = stared?
the end... it just works so perfectly with the start which works so perfectly with the middle which works so perfectly with the end.
yes. i am quite in love with this piece.
such a random reason for not being able to drink coffee anymore.
stop listening to a song coz it reminds you of her sure...
refuse to walk down a certain street coz it reminds you of her sure...
but stop drinking coffee...?
sounds like youve really been burnt by this whole love game...
i can see her lips.
i adore that theyre red. i think every girl/woman ought to own red lipstick. i am going out to get mine some time this week i think lol. if i remember lol.
yes. this was a very well constructed piece.
i am really impressed =)
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my,interesting pen Edward,Hugssssss|