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If I Could Be
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Missy Cross
Wednesday, May 10, 2006
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Fellow Den member Felix Perry has penned a lovely poem, "You Are", in response to the questions I played with here. I've posted a link to his site below. Please give it a read; I hope you are as touched by his answers as I was.
In truth, this poem wasn't intended to be romantic. It's simply my attempt to capture the things I wish my words could do. I guess you could consider it an ode to the muse, as such...
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If I could be the light in your eyes,
To shower your world with dreams...
What would you see?
If I could be the light in your hands,
To sprinkle your stories with stars...
What would you read?
If I could be the light in your heart,
To spice your tomorrows with smiles...
What would you feel?
If I could be the light in your mind,
To stoke your causes with rainbows...
What would you believe?
© 2006 Melissa Cross. All rights reserved. No part of this piece may be reproduced without the express permission of the author.
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| Reviewed by Carol Grace |
8/1/2009 |
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I love poems that ask questions. Good job.
Carol |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
5/21/2009 |
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Very nicely penned Missy. It fairly floated into my den......
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
7/26/2008 |
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| I would see love in your heart, I would read love in your eyes, so sparkling and bright, I would feel that you are a loving person indeed, I would believe you are a very colorful and exciting person to live with. Good questioning write. |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
3/27/2008 |
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| ...I would see magic... |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
1/6/2008 |
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| Beautiful writing~~~* |
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| Reviewed by April Sims |
9/1/2007 |
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| Very nice. I loved this. If I could be . . . so few words but potent like a shot of espresso. |
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| Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher |
5/15/2006 |
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A very beautiful expression and, after reading Felix', the two are in perfect harmonie!
Birgit and Roger |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/11/2006 |
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Missy,
This is beautiful. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/11/2006 |
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Mellisa you have asked all the right questions that a women (or man) in love should ask but already know the answers to in their heart.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Bill Broome |
5/11/2006 |
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This is one of your bestin a field in which you excel. Your pen takes a beautiful flight in asking rich and loving questions of life itself.
- Bill
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
5/11/2006 |
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| Oh, I imagine my eyes would be filled with your everlasting concern for my welfare and attitude about life, and also that I would be smiling in return for your favors, as I am now. Very nice "feel-good" piece and there ain't nuttin' wrong with feel-good poetry if they are of this caliber. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/10/2006 |
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| I would believe you are a fine poet!;-) |
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