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| Reviewed by Dawn Mullan |
10/18/2006 |
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| Excellent, I love short poems with great depth. Thank you, DL Mullan |
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| Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher |
5/23/2006 |
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This is just beautiful!
Birgit and Roger |
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| Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore |
5/22/2006 |
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| i love this, and it is written in the true spirit of haiku, when so many structurally correct haiku are not. taking the mundane and finding the deep, abiding truth within, is definitely a meditation upon life and creation. soul=kudos, poet! |
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| Reviewed by Suzie Palmer |
5/21/2006 |
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Oh Melissa,
Beautiful ... penetrates deeply in the heart!
Love, Suzie :-D
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/20/2006 |
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Agree with William, very unique and original, the image lingers on the mind long after the page is turned.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Bill Broome |
5/20/2006 |
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Hey! This is a fresh one! A FOUR point Ohhhh!
One of the more different nature Haiku submissions.
- Bill
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
5/20/2006 |
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| A lover's lament in a Haiku format, which is done to perfection. |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
5/19/2006 |
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This is a great write here
God Bless
Michelle! |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
5/19/2006 |
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| Just think if it were an "up-pour", LOL! Ed |
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