|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|Missed that one love, but them my trackers do not seem to be working 100% these days. Guess I will just have to spend more time here.
love you (again)
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|And all these tears.
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|The repetition is quite effective here, Janet. Makes one think. Thanks for the comment on my recent poem. All good things, Dawn|
|Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez
Good stuff of all that was and what what shouldn't be too!
Rich Criso Suarez
|Reviewed by Cynthia Borris
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|Depicts a delightful picture of nostalgia and memory that gladdens the heart
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Beautiful memories of so long ago...well done! Flowed like a song--
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|You have brought us down memory lane with you Janet..
Simply superb sonnet~`*
|Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
|Very nice write Janet..How is everything going??|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|ah, the tug of time... beautiful, Janet.|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a good poem brings the reader into the experience as you so have so vividly done ...|
|Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I love the way you draw the reader into the emotion of the actions of the characters. Fantastic write!|
|Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
|Janet... Excellent write...|
|Reviewed by Bob Holt
|Yes, we've all been here, but you, like myself, remain 31 years old. You've got to believe.
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Superb write Janet it oozes with memory and pathos but is sublime in it's impact...excellent.
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|In All Its Pain You Are Still Here(Overcome) After All These Years_
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Been a long time, miss reading you. I really like how you've worded this great piece.
|Reviewed by C. J. Stevens
|Simplicity merged with magic. A rhythmic metaphor of life. This is a very fine poem, and it has staying power.
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|First, Janny, before I forget, that bio picture you've got up today rocks, girl! You look gorgeous. :-) You worked this one, lady. The repetition is in the groove, perfect for spoken word and it moves the poem to punctuated poignancy. For so many reasons I started to weep on this one. Did you get the webpage I sent you with the song you like and the extra? ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)
|Ah janet, 1964 seems so long ago after all of these years the fire still burns. dim warm, and comforting. Peace and blessings wonderful poet. Have a rose on me. <HUGS> Mikii who was 27 in 1964.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Another heart stopper from your golden pen Janet. We don't see enough of them around here! thanks for sharing!
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
I miss your work, miss you! You have my e-mail addy, let me
know how your doing! The poem...is filled with your unique way
of jolting us right out of our seats!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Sigh. I remember 1964. I remember the strawberry fields. This stirred my soul, Janny. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|wonderful write, janet; very well done! brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
|Blissful memories that come around in the real. Ah yes. R|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Excellent! The repetition is a metaphor in itself,
isn't it. Canny choice!! You have taken a common theme
and turned it into something extraordinary. In a few
words, at that. MORE!! Phyllis <3
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Whoa, I was sailing along, thoroughly enjoying the brisk, backward glances here and in my head, and Wham! That is a single-barrel, between-the-eyes ending, Janet... stunned me... magnificent! katy xox|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Could it be THAT long ago??
Geeeeez we are getting old.....lol!!!
Fine piece of poetry Sister!!
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
I enjoyed the reading of "So Long Ago".
Very impressive composition.
Healthy Long Creative Life, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
|I like the repetative lines it serves to emphasize the point ... Well Done Jan!!........Thanks Sandi|