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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
7/12/2005 |
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Missed that one love, but them my trackers do not seem to be working 100% these days. Guess I will just have to spend more time here.
love you (again)
talk soon,
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/10/2005 |
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And all these tears.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
7/10/2005 |
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| The repetition is quite effective here, Janet. Makes one think. Thanks for the comment on my recent poem. All good things, Dawn |
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| Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez |
7/8/2005 |
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Good stuff of all that was and what what shouldn't be too!
Rich Criso Suarez |
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| Reviewed by Cynthia Borris |
7/7/2005 |
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Janet,
Memorable write.
Cynthia |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
7/7/2005 |
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Depicts a delightful picture of nostalgia and memory that gladdens the heart
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/7/2005 |
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Janet,
Beautiful memories of so long ago...well done! Flowed like a song--
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
7/7/2005 |
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You have brought us down memory lane with you Janet..
Simply superb sonnet~`* |
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| Reviewed by Robin Labenberg |
7/6/2005 |
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| Very nice write Janet..How is everything going?? |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
7/6/2005 |
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| ah, the tug of time... beautiful, Janet. |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
7/6/2005 |
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| good one |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/6/2005 |
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| a good poem brings the reader into the experience as you so have so vividly done ... |
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| Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop |
7/5/2005 |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/5/2005 |
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| I love the way you draw the reader into the emotion of the actions of the characters. Fantastic write! |
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| Reviewed by Tracey Hardie |
7/5/2005 |
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| Janet... Excellent write... |
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| Reviewed by Bob Holt |
7/4/2005 |
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Yes, we've all been here, but you, like myself, remain 31 years old. You've got to believe.
Bob H |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
7/3/2005 |
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Superb write Janet it oozes with memory and pathos but is sublime in it's impact...excellent.
Paul;-) |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
7/2/2005 |
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In All Its Pain You Are Still Here(Overcome) After All These Years_
Excellent...
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
7/2/2005 |
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Hi Janet,
Been a long time, miss reading you. I really like how you've worded this great piece. |
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| Reviewed by C. J. Stevens |
7/2/2005 |
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Simplicity merged with magic. A rhythmic metaphor of life. This is a very fine poem, and it has staying power.
CJ |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
7/2/2005 |
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| First, Janny, before I forget, that bio picture you've got up today rocks, girl! You look gorgeous. :-) You worked this one, lady. The repetition is in the groove, perfect for spoken word and it moves the poem to punctuated poignancy. For so many reasons I started to weep on this one. Did you get the webpage I sent you with the song you like and the extra? ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) |
7/2/2005 |
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| Ah janet, 1964 seems so long ago after all of these years the fire still burns. dim warm, and comforting. Peace and blessings wonderful poet. Have a rose on me. <HUGS> Mikii who was 27 in 1964. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/2/2005 |
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Another heart stopper from your golden pen Janet. We don't see enough of them around here! thanks for sharing!
Love,
etw |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
7/2/2005 |
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Janet,
I miss your work, miss you! You have my e-mail addy, let me
know how your doing! The poem...is filled with your unique way
of jolting us right out of our seats!
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/2/2005 |
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| Sigh. I remember 1964. I remember the strawberry fields. This stirred my soul, Janny. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/2/2005 |
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wonderful write, janet; very well done! brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine |
7/2/2005 |
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| Blissful memories that come around in the real. Ah yes. R |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
7/2/2005 |
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Excellent! The repetition is a metaphor in itself,
isn't it. Canny choice!! You have taken a common theme
and turned it into something extraordinary. In a few
words, at that. MORE!! Phyllis <3 |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
7/2/2005 |
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| Whoa, I was sailing along, thoroughly enjoying the brisk, backward glances here and in my head, and Wham! That is a single-barrel, between-the-eyes ending, Janet... stunned me... magnificent! katy xox |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/2/2005 |
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Could it be THAT long ago??
Geeeeez we are getting old.....lol!!!
Fine piece of poetry Sister!!
Loveeeeee Tinky |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
7/2/2005 |
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I enjoyed the reading of "So Long Ago".
Very impressive composition.
Healthy Long Creative Life, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Sandi Schraut |
7/2/2005 |
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| I like the repetative lines it serves to emphasize the point ... Well Done Jan!!........Thanks Sandi |
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