Men/Women/Relationships...for a friend of mine....xoxoxo
I’ll never know, why the obvious, caught her by surprise.
Sweet voice, loving touch, she dismissed his lies;
that surround the crust on his mouth
and dammit, those lust filled eyes.
She got lost in a trance, being with him there, in her now.
Always gathering herself, and asking… “do I love you and why?...
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A timeless and universal theme... ...makes me a bit sad but you shared it very well, Janet. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen
|We know the name of passion, but we do not know her,
when unleashed she moves planets around suns,
but when harnessed, she moves suns around universes,
and satisfies our insatiable taste for love.
Always follow it, even if it strikes you down.
Great poem Janet
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Gripped me in a strange way. She should have seen it coming, but somehow, she never does.
|Reviewed by Miller Caldwell
|The complexity of life and loves
Reamain a mystery to our wives
They don't believe me that she's the one
I wonder why? We share our lives