Dim lamplight sky
Houses look like they were made dolls
lit with tiny bulbs
When looking down from sky
Who deserve to be treated as real.
This one is pretty good -- I haven't seen writings from you in while, so I thought I would drop a note. I had written a few on here as well as a short story on my online journal. If you want to see that, the address is http://nickolaus.diary-x.com -- let me know what you think.