Astral Dance: Tango of the Superlative Mind
Her superlative mind
leavens the loaf of
her bashful beauty,
powder of eternal
The principle of
as opposed to
as above, so below,
as below, so above,
an admirer's love,
everything is dual,
everything has a
pair of opposites,
like and unlike
like her name,
in nature, different in
rise and fall,
All is mind,
keep alive the
sacred flame of
is in all,
Cause and Effect,
every Cause has effect,
every Effect has cause,
Perfect tango, cause for
Time to re-light
lesser lamps of
when light of truth
out there on the
When wick and
wax clogs with
the Lamp of Wisdom
fed by pure sages
takes to the stages in
Astral Dance: Tango
of the Superlative Mind.
Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
Sage Sweetwater Creative Properties
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|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Oh my, Sage, such a beautifully scripted metaphysical romp! Nothing finer than dancing one's way out on some distant, attenuated astral limb seeking the light of Truth...
This is a superb creative piece.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|This is GORGEOUS, Sage; one of your best. Stunning imagery, powerful writing make this one work beautifully! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Saving this one--thanks!
|Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop
|i thought the first stanza great that thin crust of the mind's divide
when i think of tango i think of buenas aires and the sleezy cafes of
the underworld & macho rituals & those starry nights of borges & the whirl of the tango days saludos
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Poise and tension; balance and counterbalance; the centrifugal force binding all things together, bringing them close, and the opposing force keeping the tension true and holding them apart. This diverse and eclectic write puts the whole of life into the bag and shakes up our expectations nicely, producing a magimix cocktail for our mental and physical delectation. This has the energy of the Tango and the strength and grace of The Bolshoi. Love the style; whether it be from the hieroglyphs on the walls of a pyramid or from the mouth of a Sacred Monk in the hills of Tibet, each phrase has weight and glory waiting to be unlocked. A veritable treasure hunt, thank you The Sage xx|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|A wonderful poetic dance of words...|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I love cause and effect, pro & con, good & bad, black and white...all the same, yet differing in their own unspecified way...ed|
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|love the supernatural aspect of this write, this is the first of this type that i've read of you...the depth of your knowledge is apparent, your interest in those topics of a higher type..i look forward to reading more!|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Splendid thoughtful poem.. Clever chiastics too.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|This piece is very cosmic in its method. The yin yang premise is throughout the whole piece of work and it's presence is the bulwark of what you are giving the reader. Nothing is stationary or complete in the astral dance.|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|In the Law of Diminishing Returns, the more you put into a project, the less return you get for your efforts !
You achieve the impossible by exercising your ethereal art in an effortless and fluent manner, that both captivates and endears your audience to your works !
I love the spectacular artwork too Sage
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Tremendous work! I love it.|