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Remodel your mind in the buff, can't get enough,
passion peeling the plaster, c'mon baby, do it faster,
spread it thick, another brick in the wall,
turn off your monitor, lick the brick, seduce her,
climb her mud-brick palace, give her the phallus,
limestone plaster chips inside her walls, raise her hips, drink from her chalice,
Sexual Pyramid, her burial shaft set in the courtyard, forested in papyrus,
escaping old connections, remodel your mind in the buff, another brick in the wall makes for a complex puzzle
trace the hieroglyphs that rain down the bricks, incised with lust,
another brick in the wall life-everlasting begins with a journey through the brick wall of fire and spitting cobras into the hall of judgment.
Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
7/3/2006 |
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| Very good. Reminds me of the true story of a handyman remodeling 'naked'. He said it helped him express himself better. However, the homeowner came home early and didn't get the 'artistic expression' and fired him. |
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| Reviewed by Thomas Garrett |
7/3/2006 |
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Excellent. I love yourimagery, Sage. (I also like hte image accompanying this piece, too.)
Sonny G |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/2/2006 |
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One can feel the erotic passion flowing powerfully from these verses, Sage. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/1/2006 |
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erotica at its finest; splendid writing, sage, and love the picture! oooh, la la!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
7/1/2006 |
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May I have an original print of the leading lady?
p l e a s e . . . . .
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
7/1/2006 |
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| "spitting cobras" Gotta love it. Tear down that wall, brick by brick, or at least give it a good old fashioned licking. That'll put the wall in its place . . . |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
6/30/2006 |
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Your Muse has awesome musical tastes...and other passionate buds as well...especially in this pen.
Susan |
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