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Remodel your mind
in the buff, can't
get enough,
passion peeling
the plaster,
c'mon baby, do
it faster,
spread it thick,
another brick
in the wall,
turn off your
monitor, lick
the brick,
seduce her,
climb her
mud-brick
palace, give
her the phallus,
limestone plaster
chips inside her
walls, raise her
hips, drink from her
chalice,
Sexual Pyramid,
her burial shaft
set in the courtyard,
forested in papyrus,
escaping old connections,
remodel your mind
in the buff, another
brick in the wall
makes for a complex
puzzle
trace the hieroglyphs
that rain down the bricks,
incised with lust,
another brick in the wall
life-everlasting begins
with a journey through
the brick wall of fire
and spitting cobras
into the hall of judgment.
Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
7/3/2006 |
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| Very good. Reminds me of the true story of a handyman remodeling 'naked'. He said it helped him express himself better. However, the homeowner came home early and didn't get the 'artistic expression' and fired him. |
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| Reviewed by Thomas Garrett |
7/3/2006 |
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Excellent. I love yourimagery, Sage. (I also like hte image accompanying this piece, too.)
Sonny G |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/2/2006 |
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One can feel the erotic passion flowing powerfully from these verses, Sage. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/1/2006 |
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erotica at its finest; splendid writing, sage, and love the picture! oooh, la la!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
7/1/2006 |
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May I have an original print of the leading lady?
p l e a s e . . . . .
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
7/1/2006 |
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| "spitting cobras" Gotta love it. Tear down that wall, brick by brick, or at least give it a good old fashioned licking. That'll put the wall in its place . . . |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
6/30/2006 |
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Your Muse has awesome musical tastes...and other passionate buds as well...especially in this pen.
Susan |
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