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Blackmail's Last Ride at Chalk Creek Gulch
up to its knees in grass,
I inhaled, filled my lungs
with a hemp sack of heavy
wooden decoys over my shoulder,
riding on, leaving half a cord of wood
behind for blackmail's last ride,
feral dogs and
guides, scraped venison
hides, barter for snowshoes
and blacksmith tools, approaching
winter solstice of '83, pioneers here
to confuse the creditor and law, I saw
her maiden name on the cabin door, give
the fabler her due, whiskey too,
that smacked of
miners, gamblers, ladies
of the night, she called me
in, lifted her top off - her dutch
oven, I bought her brown sliced
venison and boiled potatoes, she
let loose a literacy barrage outlining
the defects of the timber and stone laws,
she gave me a hit off her molybdenum pipe,
I inhaled eventual uses and benefits, high authority
between miner and assay, even today some pose the
question, was it arranged destiny?
aromas, she asked
what I had in mind, "hemp
sack of wooden decoys, blackmail's
last ride at Chalk Creek Gulch, fat mallards,
widgeons, canvasbacks and pintails on the beaver
pond, flush blackmail out from the willows,"
in the tippiness
of that canoe, her
pussy scraping against
the side of mine, blackmail
crawling on its hands and knees
behind us waiting to see what is ahead,
flush blackmail out of the willows,
Copyright 10/07/08 Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
Lesbian Western Novel
DOMINGA RIO OF CUERO
Release date late 2008
Soon To Be Ready
For Screen Adaptation
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|Reviewed by Timothy Flaherty
|Sage you seem to be caught somewhere in the mid to late 1800's as well as today. The exchange of both worlds is alluring. "heresay tale that smacked of Hollywood melodrama, miners, gamblers, ladies." Which world imposes you the most? I do enjoy the cracked saddle feel that smacks of primrose and whiskey in the words you write. Tim|
|Reviewed by Richard Orey
|My, oh, my, as the owner of a bright red canoe, I can tell you from personal experience that getting sexually frisky in a canoe is taking a bit of a risk. But, of course, so is getting sexually frisky anyplace.
I love your poems filled with history!
|Reviewed by Butch Howard
|The cinematic quality of your poetry always gets to me. I got dizzy at the "tippiness" of that canoe, vibrating with passion and high romance. Awesome as always... Your friend,
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|It is always nice to read you Sage. You leave nothing to the imagination, except where to find a partner like that. I also echo what Vickey said too. This is a very sensual, romantic, no holds barred adventure in raw lesbian passion. Thank yuo for sharing Sage.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Sage, my dear friend, your writings are so different than mine...perhaps far better. Always a pleasure, love Holly|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|"Blackmail's Last Ride at Chalk Creek Gulch"
is the no bars story poem of raw lesbian adventures & emotions, sensually captivating me with deep intrigue....harness the days my friend & ride your beautiful poetic dream into the next lusting encounter of reality's promise
Much Love To You Always
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced ~ Embrassé
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Raw, real, and powerful. Ya done real good once again, girl. Respectfully as always,
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|your visuals are amazing and the telling details you pick are so intriguing, bringing all the senses alive and standing to attention! The worlds you create are so plausible and you have a most uncanny knack for sucking the reader right in from first word to last - YET allowing us to feel that we have been privileged to be a fly-on-the-wall of an ongoing situation. That tippy canoe sounds like bliss! Bet you're good at a roll! :)) xx|
|Reviewed by Saberi Roy
|always a wonderful story ..flowing so easily..vivid imagery. enjoyed,Sage - S|
|Reviewed by Kenny Moon
|Your 619th title at AD, Sage, and it takes me into the wild west of your imagination as always. Horses galloping, feral dogs roaming and dust blowing in a gritty fabled landscape. Best wishes!|
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
|Your writing kept the imageries alive in your readers' head. Wonderful sensual write, Sage!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|The imagery in your writing always amazes me, Sage. Few can write a story the way you can.|
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|I always have to ride down the trail to find you Ms. Sage, and peep though the window or from behind the trees around the creek to watch and learn about history, about life, about a good fuck.|
|Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
|packed with so much story ponder, your detail, wooden decoys, pond life, a hit of molymoo42 (what was that like?!) even today, way into the future they will ask, Sage - it was good to read you, this one i'll read againandagain, Blackmail's Last Ride, good to see this on the poetry board, sent love and a canesugarrum strawberry caiparihna's late soltice warmth to you last night, while a Brazilian Celtic band played old favourites - amazing! Hope all is well with you Sage xxx|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Sage you are a brilliant writer, truly you are. Never a wasted word, always vivid images and and ambience that takes us to where you are.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You sure know how to mesmerize the senses Sage!
Always fine writing from your powerful pen!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|old world aromas do have a way of rearranging their destiny so the sexuality of the forest reminds one to flow across its rivers effortlessly and frequently ... as always, mind jostling poetry, Sage ...|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Nice too read you again Sage..welcome back....nice writing....enjoyed very much...have a wonderful and safe night...Hugssss|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|the joy of reading your work makes my day. Wonderful write. Love the canoe. Liz|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Glad you're back, Sage. You and your talented pen are so much fun
it's grim around here when you ride off like that. Incidentally,
I love Blackmail's Last Ride...andthe tippicanoe. -gene.
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
rich vocabulary, focused elegant phrasing, strong consistent imagery and a fine storyline carry this wonderfully. It's so good to have you back, I missed your poetry.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|I love the way you write - the immediacy of the mood set in the opening lines, lingering on the eyes, long after having been s(c)ene - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Raw and old world, the frontier woman at her best. Love it.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|wonderful-real, vibrant--i think i get that most-the virance of those in your writing-the vibrance of life and living and loving|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Marvelous in imagery, verse, and music!! BRAVA, Sage!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|You always bring me to new territory each time I read your work. This one was especially mind enlightening...
Thank you for another fine read.
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|As always after reading your poetry, I have an intense hankering for a crackling fire and my man comin' home! You really do create the scene. It always amazes me. :)|
|Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
You rebel in scarlet you. Your writs are always filled with sensualities that bask in the realities of life around them.
This is really a delight.