|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|It ain't easy being heathen what with those pesky brooms beating me to the punch. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|"cornbread crumbles", but of course! And even when there are no heathens present. "Quaker brooms sweep" everything off the floor including cornbread crumbs. But not the heathens themelves, who have a right to be there if they so choose. And no apologies must they give. Sage, the sound and aroma of this "cornbread crumbles" poem is sweet. I hope your day knows the sound and feel of joy and love my friend. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|That's the way the cornbread crumbles, Sage.
Apologize to whom? -gene.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Life, and how it's lived is a personal thing...apologies? Only if they're heart felt...few lines, Sage...but oh so powerful!|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Far worse than the apology would be the excuse...well done.
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|never apologize unless you intend to change and that would be a pity.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|when one crumbles under the pressure of the maze, the dough left is the bread of unfilled dreams ...|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|I dropped a whole apple pie today.
I'm not saying sorry either, and I'm not even getting the broom.
This pleases me, thank you. Lovely ~
|Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
|I love this verse.|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|in the eyes of this beholder of heathens
I have experienced it wouldn't matter
if they apologized...
I know I never apologize unless I mean it
and those far cries are countable on one hand
in touch with my inner heathen-Passion
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Short, but says volumes. Excellent poetry, Sage; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Yes, they are a tidy lot, Sage,
or they like to think they are.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|No one needs to apologize for how they live their lives, very pointed and direct...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Yes but there so good with a cup of coffee. The dumb ass got it the first time...LOL