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A Family Abuse
by Maria Cristina Azcona
Wednesday, May 09, 2001
Not rated by the Author.
Beauty in moonlight |
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Beauty in moonlight.
Beauty in monster´s sight.
Satan and the angel, face to face.
Satanic face.
(Fire, desire, fire, desire).
Truly ice, in the eyes.
Forced, chilled, frozen care for the child.
Wild, mild, cruel sweetness in the glance.
Candy, toys are dancing with the demon.
Clumsy toy grows on cloudy days.
Clumsiness is growing
this morning
through an evil dance
at moonlight.
(glance, dance, glance)
Nobody is receiving messages today
from Baby.
baby is being abused,
being abused,
being abused.
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| Reviewed by Shelley Moss |
6/13/2003 |
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Your writing style is simply awesome! Very deep and chills the bone leaving you with thoughts to ponder. Thank you for a great read! I am an Advisor at Keen and I help people everyday with such issues as this and drugs, relationships, many teen/women issues and general well being. I was wondering if you would add my button to your bio page somwhere? I have been working with people now for 7 years and even though I am new at Keen I already am helping more people and I hope to continue helping those in need. I have no degree, just first hand knowledge which means I can help on a more personal note. I will include my html for my button if you decide to use it and if not I will fully understand. If you do use my button please type under it.....Need help/support on issues such as drugs, abuse, the many teen/women issues? How about relationship advice or just need a gentle voice on the other end? Then call Shelley now! She truly cares and will be there for your every step needed.
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If you wish I would be soooooo grateful if you would pass my button and info around to other writers here at AD that may wish to use my button or to friends who have websites. Thanks for a great read and Godbless!
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Shelley |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
4/18/2003 |
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Does make one think
Abuse is the lowest of the low... |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
3/11/2003 |
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| Chilling....but very deep and powerful write...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Linn Lindner |
11/17/2002 |
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| how sad. how scary! good write..just makes one think! ~~~Linnie |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
7/23/2002 |
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| Powerful and heart~felt! |
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| Reviewed by Donna Swanson |
5/30/2002 |
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Dear Maria,
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| Reviewed by ... ... |
5/27/2002 |
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| Soulfull and chilling. Good form too. ~E |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell (author) |
7/24/2001 |
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| Very soulful! JC |
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| Reviewed by S H (Reader) |
5/18/2001 |
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| I really love your style of writing. |
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| Reviewed by Hayley Juhl |
5/10/2001 |
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| Chilling! |
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