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| Reviewed by Safi Abdi |
1/19/2008 |
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Exactly! Afkaaga caana lagu shub! Abdillahi, dadkan aad baad u fahantay, I pray for peace and prosperity, Thank you!
Eedo Safi
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
7/19/2007 |
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| intense, and it breaks it down to the very basic, doesn't it |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
7/14/2007 |
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Powerful and intense write!
What is mankind thinking or not thinking
Just doing!
War against my brother!
A heartbreaking words!
Very very powerful write!!
Love Peace and Joy many Hugssss to you always...Morning Star |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
7/14/2007 |
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| You have defined the effects of tribalism with this short poem whereas it would take years for researchers to dig into the fathomless pits of the somali tragedy to come up with a conclusion on the horrors of the somali civil war. Thanks brother |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/13/2007 |
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Truth in succinct lines, Abdi-Noor, dysfunctional at best. What is mankind doing? We're wiping out our own brothers and sisters in the name of love; we're driving creatures to extinction; what does man want? To be the last survivor on the planet? Such a lonely existance...powerfully penned heartbreak.
(((HUGS))), love and prayer, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Sekou-Ajene Tafari |
7/13/2007 |
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| POWERFUL POETRY |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
7/12/2007 |
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"War Against My Brother" shows the picture of the indifference of all FIVE PERMANENT MEMBERS OF THE U.N. SECURITY COUNCIL. THE LORDS OF INDUSTRIAL WARS; HUMAN DEGRADATION, STARVATION AND SLAVERY.
Keep ringing the bells of JUSTICE, Poet!
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/12/2007 |
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| an extremely dysfunctional situation ... |
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| Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader) |
7/12/2007 |
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Powerful poem! An eye opener.
Thanks for sharing.
Patti |
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