During the Summer Storm
by Dragon Blue
Saturday, July 01, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
Share
Print Save Become a Fan
During the Summer Storm |
|
During the Summer Storm
Silently I watch the sea reach Extra sand in the alkali to bleach As seagulls dive for food and screech.
Sonic, salty sounds as they crash As if in answer to the lightening flash Nesting as if they chose to remain Detached from the coming rain.
Broken waves splash heavy as they land Undercurrents tug, pull and demand Next to the rocks that cove and collect Corner debris to catch the effect. Holding back the water flow
Onto the surf, the tide low; Finessing the tangle of seaweeds
Washing foam covers the reeds. Other voices of the ocean laugh Opting to create the epitaph During the summer storm
|
|
|
Want to review or comment on this
poem?
Click here to login!
Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!
|
| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/4/2006 |
|
I like the way you have recreated and evoked the atmosphere. Well done. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Linda Roman |
7/7/2006 |
|
| very well expressed! |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
7/1/2006 |
|
| Creative construct, Maylynn! Beautiful imagery! I'm longing for the sea and there I plan to be before Summer's gone. This stirs the soul...Lin |
|
|
|
|