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Goddess Venus
by Silvina Castellano
Wednesday, July 16, 2003
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Oh! Languid goddess who sees the world
from on high tempestuous Olympus,
so presumptuous of your beauty.
You, who emerged from the bewitched
waters of eternal sea.
Your skin has been threaded with gold
and silver fibres.
Your golden hair was wrought with
innate refinement.
You seduce every man with your
slender silhouette,
but your conscience scrutinizes your
not so beautiful behavior.
Why,each time your enchantment
increases, does the white
foam from where you once emerged ,
turn to be so dark?
Through negligence, perhaps all
goodness you destroyed.
Your ironic vanity, like a symphonic
agony, rushes at your skin, ruining
its magnificent purity.
In any case, Oh! my Muse, I beg you
to revive your melodious harmony
for us.
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Silvina Castellano IN THE MUNDO HUECO anthology at Rowe Publishing. UK
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| Reviewed by William DeVault |
5/6/2006 |
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| I must applaud, very well done. I love your 'voice' in your writing, very elegant and articulate. |
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| Reviewed by Shreekumar Varma |
4/6/2006 |
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| the words flow with your mood, probably beckoning us to mount olympus! keep it going, we're waiting. |
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| Reviewed by Hanley Harding |
1/18/2006 |
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Dear Silvina;
Thisis excellent. May I recommend to you, my poems "Crystal Dreams" and "The Touch"?
Yours truly,
Doc
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
6/10/2005 |
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| A beauty. Glad to make your aquaintence, Silvina... |
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| Reviewed by POETESS Of The Soul - SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing in PURPLE Passions_ |
5/11/2005 |
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| I haven't met your work /writings yet! :) Glad I fell upon it today... This is REally GOOD! I love your descriptions- I hope you write more........ Truly,Sheee |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/27/2005 |
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| You write very well, Silvina. Thank you for sharing this poetic beauty. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
7/16/2003 |
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| Hello...This is outstanding work from the magical pen of yours....I am lured and completely mesmerized by the divine beauty of this breathtaking write....cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) |
7/16/2003 |
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I'm glad I stumbled upon this.
I wish I spoke spanish so I could understand the rest of your work.
-James |
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