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Debashish Haar

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The Unrelated
by Debashish Haar
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A Writing Workshop Exercise

She had no reason to have reason
for everything,
and so much of room
for every desire

hated and loved all at the same time,
laughed and cried all at once,

and then when she found him,
his soul was nomad,
and his mind was amateur.

Now, he tries and fumbles,
learns and forgets,
and then gets drunk in vacuum.

They say he lives like smoke,
and her memory rises
from this mansion of memoir.

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Reviewed by April Pittman
You, my friend, have a new fan.
Reviewed by jude forese
though unrelated, their ties are inevitable ...
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
I love this. You have always written with such clarity, making clarity out of seemingly unrelated things. Thank you for sharing... =)

In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Super cool poem.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Like random free radicals that irresisibly attract, this has my kind of logic attached and sounds so very familiar. I am descended from this hazy line of Unrelated, that's for certain sure! Explains much, like holding a mirror to my face. Wish I could have conceived something similar, Debs, because this, to me, reads most definitely like memoir.

"They say he will live like a smoke" - what a great line! Says it all. xx
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