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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
11/19/2007 |
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| well done |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
10/26/2007 |
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This composition like most of Your works leads one to the magic of the family's togethernesss.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
9/26/2007 |
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WOW! A miracle "I" pray!
What a dear sweet brother you are! The intense bond shows!
May strength be apart of each of your passionate hearts!
Thank you for sharing yours openly! God Bless!
Warmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive! Happy and STrong! |
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| Reviewed by Cedric III |
8/4/2007 |
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how odd.
i know someone with your name [Larry Matthews... not sure about the D though...]
anyways...
i like the allusion to cain and abel 'am i my brothers keeper' and the way you have changed it and rearranged it to show us how it SHOULD be. that is really well done.
i like the way you have written this.
you are not negligent of the fact that your brother is not who you know him to be but you do not say that he is not who he is. if that makes any sense.
sure he cannot talk, eat, interact like he used to but he is still your brother and his counrage and strength are still fierce and all those traits that you remember being outworked still remain within him.
and while some days he may not look like your brother physically i think this is a brilliant tribute to the brother you know him to be and also to your mother who clearly taught you boys how to look after eachother.
beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Sharon Whitworth Daring Sunshine |
6/26/2007 |
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Wow, what a tribute to your brother. You have a closeness few really know or will take the time to appreciate. What a blessing you are to him as he is to you.
God Bless,
Sharon |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
6/8/2007 |
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| warm and special poem that impacts. thanks for sharing it. |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
6/7/2007 |
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| Larry, I can so relate to your writing...it touched my heart and I relieved a few moments with my brother. This is such a wonderful tribute to your brother and I'm sure he knows in his heart how much you love and care for him. I'll keep the two of you in my prayers and know you'll get a certain peace and comfort during your day. God Bless You. |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
6/7/2007 |
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what a wonderful tribute to your brother...good on you and,
Peace always
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
6/7/2007 |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/7/2007 |
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Luke,
Beautiful tribute to your brother; well done! Would that more less fortunate people had family like this.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
6/7/2007 |
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| Wonderful writing,enjoyed...Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/7/2007 |
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| a wonderful tribute to family and the ties that bind us so closely |
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