|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
A vivid picture from these lines. The last line is powerful; you capture the passion we have when we first conceive a dream. Hugs:)
|Reviewed by Denise Nowakowski
|Thank you for sharing, Roger. This gave me the goose bump. Very moving tribute to a deserving grandfather. Well done.
|Reviewed by Leann Marshall
I have read that a miner's life was very hard and unimaginable to those of us who pass our days in the light. This was very powerful and really, not only a tribute to your grandfather, but to those who shared his dangerous work.
Thank you for sharing this.
|Reviewed by Sol Solinski (Reader)
|I really don't care about your grandfather and your poetry is so god awful that Walt Whitman's ghost should cockslap you|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|what a well done piece-|
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Great images ! A moving tribute to your grandpa....M|
|Reviewed by Candida Eittreim
|Roger this is very well done. Your grandfather earned this
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Wow this is some awesome descriptive work here <chills>feels like your grandfather is here!!!!
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|To shine a headlamp on a life in so few words is awesome. You can be proud of him and this poem.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Wow...powerful emotions and sentiments. Bravo. Enjoyed very much.|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Awesome write Roger...
I could feel every word
you wrote. That shows you
are a darn good writer!
I'll be reading more of you...
I also have a poem about my
grandfather..The Man I Never
Knew.. Check it out sometimes.
Again...awesome write here.
|Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
|I can picture your grandfather in my mind. I almost feel like I know him now. Excellent write.|