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Emancipated Intoxication
by Nicole L. Davis Vergara
Wednesday, November 23, 2005
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Impaired senses speak not the truth, or do they?

Tear stained crumpled crimson velvet
satin black rain stained pumps to match
Wardrobe of a tainted romance
shattered heart, accessory to accompany

Scathed the heart that swoons to soon
adorned in crimson velvet, ready for love
Mr. Right awaits, devil in disguise
dripping candles hinting romance

Pearly smile undertowed swells of lies
let me love you, forever you will be mine
Faint the mind ruled by foolish heart
instantaneous love, margarita mix

Pass the salt, savor the sweat
inebriated desire now stains the lips
sweet intoxication, dulled and foggy senses
two hundred dollars later, all in a nights work


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Reviewed by Michael LaSalle 5/28/2007
your words speak valumes, i am in awe, Wow, what a powerful vision! breathtaking in every way, love it, mike
Reviewed by Chrissy McVay 11/26/2005
Great poem. I too like researching and discovering other places, cultures, etc. Isn't diversity fantastic!
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 11/24/2005

I liked this "Emancipated Intoxication". The depicting of the actions setting the net picture at the closing line with its brilliant imagery combination, made this a poetic grand.

I salute You, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 11/24/2005
Wonderful story with a surprise ending! Enjoyed!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight* Authors & Creations 11/24/2005
Again, dearest Nikki, the breathtaking power of poetry splashing the vivid colours of unique imagery upon the canvas of the reader's mind. It's not easy to signal "the genius brushstroke" in what is, in its wholeness, a masterpiece, but I dare pointing out the first and the last stanzas as absolutely remarkable. They pack one powerful punch! What a pleasure it is to read your poetry - and if I've already said this, it's not redundancy... it's because it's true :0)!
A most wonderful day to you and yours, overflowing with
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 11/23/2005
great imagery - loved that end...
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 11/23/2005
Power in your pen...
Happy Thanksgiving!
Reviewed by john zimmerman 11/23/2005
so very well donr

good write

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 11/23/2005
Wow Nikki, This is absolutely fantastic. you've really captured this to a tee. "Mr. Right awaits, devil in disguise." Ain't that the truth! The rythym has really adds the intensity of this. Absolutely perfect! I love it!
Tracey xoox(c :)42
Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/23/2005
Nikki a powerful poem on an always thought provoking topic!
Superbly written!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 11/23/2005
Haha and whoop-de-do and I bet she never even broke a sweat.

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