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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
4/3/2009 |
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Excellent poem,great work,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Michael LaSalle |
5/28/2007 |
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| and such would be the "ruse of perfection"... A work of art, i feel grateful to read such exquisiteness, nicole, you are a Gifted writer! mike |
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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
4/29/2007 |
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| haha Excellent write! I can relate all too well as I'm sure many poets can. I too live under the curse of perfectionism but I'm learning to be easier on myself. Enjoying your work... Chanti |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
4/16/2007 |
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| Sometimes just the stream of our heart, untampered with, is closest to perfection! Wonderful poem Nikki, sage thoughts. |
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| Reviewed by Robert Jude(Ace) Forese |
4/15/2007 |
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| perfection is indeed a ruse ... as so as we attain its desired state, it becomes stagnant ... on the other hand imperfection can be beneficial since its still in motion, striving to become complete ... |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
4/15/2007 |
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"...perfection the snake." L o v e it. Also love the jab at perfectionism. Often guilty of the arrogant thought that I can "perfect" a piece, I end up ruining it by over-editing.
Thanks for reinforcing my determination to cut that s___tuff out.;0
'Pea' <3 |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Ryan |
4/15/2007 |
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Fantastic work and a hello from a new fan! My gosh, I feel as though I've just read my own biography.
xo Taylor |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/15/2007 |
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| What is on this earth can only strive for perfection, and be disappointed when it is not achieved. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/15/2007 |
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| This is taut and finely-tuned writing, Nikki. Not one word wasted and the build of your arguments is strong. Very interesting concepts expressed here and great final POV. TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/15/2007 |
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Thought-eliciting verses, Nicole. I find this most interesting. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
4/15/2007 |
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Just allow perfection to flow out gently
from your creative mind by itself
without forcing it
As you did with this Excellent piece just now
Love & Peace
William |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
4/14/2007 |
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| A brilliantly penned poem. Perfect. |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
4/14/2007 |
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Well I think you just penned a
Truly perfect and beautiful piece of
Art,The imagery is great and the flow
is excellent and you have conveyed
This message to Perfection!!!
Love And Peace To You Always
Your Friend...Morning Star |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
4/14/2007 |
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I've Always Strived For Perfection Sumhow It Always Involves Money$ That Are Never Will Be There,i.e. So, I Make Best Of What Is Left And That's Just Perfect Simply There's Nothing Else Left...
Really All Everything Is TRuly a Sacrifice...
Neat To See You're Back Nicloe I Thank You Your Kind Always Comments...
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Karen Cino |
4/14/2007 |
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What a beautiful piece you have penned here, Nicole. Perfection is in the eyes of the beholder. Never expect perfection, because you will always be let down. Strive for the best and perfection will shine through.
~hugs~
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
4/14/2007 |
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| Hmmm I look in the shaving mirror and think.....PERFECTION.. then I point it at my face, lol |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
4/14/2007 |
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| the key perhaps lies in the perception? for what can truely measure perfection? |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
4/14/2007 |
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Dear Nicole,
Expectations of perfection usually end in disappointment. Let us all just say "we strive in every moment to do the best we can" and make that our goal. If we act with sincerity, we always reach our goal. A warm welcome back!
Love and Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
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| Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations |
4/14/2007 |
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"Perfection becomes obsolete"... long before it is ever found. And why? Because, as you so wisely say, dearest Nikki... "even gods behold not perfection", and, as we say here in Portugal, "the optimum is an enemy of the good". I absolutely love this, and what a glorious return, my friend!
Love & lots of {{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}
Alexandra* |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/14/2007 |
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Very well written as only you can!!
Welcome back!!
Love tinka |
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| Reviewed by Robert Blackwell |
4/14/2007 |
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| Nicely done, Nicole, and it is good to see you again. |
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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
4/14/2007 |
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A beautiful tightly layered work of art. THE RUSE OF PERFECTION functions equally well as meditation on creativity and as an insightful commentary on the human spiritual condition. Greatly enjoyed the read.
Aberjhani |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
4/13/2007 |
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Deep ontologic thoughts strike teleological feelings in "The Ruse of Perfection". It is a magnificent poem delivering a tray of wise fruits for the mind.
In gratitude and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Gloria Buono Daly |
4/13/2007 |
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| Very intense and provacative prose. There are no seeds of perfection in this perfect place we call earth. Thank you for sharing your wisdom and creativity. My best, Gloria |
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