It seems that man has tunnel vision, and that tunnel ends not with a bright light but with perdition darkness.
2009 is witness of more wars and murderous terror than any other previous year.
The children of God are doing what the first brother, Cain, did.
And God is still waiting.
7 times seven
According to an ancient legend
the sun held, when I was born,
to give warm for one entire day
covering earth with permafrost,
and the ones that never praised
my birth were much ostracized,
that was one of the seven Laws.
Petrified trees are in my forest
you don’t know me, but know
that I am one of the horsemen
coming to knock on your door,
without the promised Paradise
or at the end of the tunnel light,
my name, one of Armageddon’s.
I been waiting for millenniums
for man to reach his perdition,
walking he does without faith
solely worshipping Mammon,
banks converted in cathedrals,
oh misery will be the ambrosial
he will harvest for what he sow.
Roaming among your flowers
it was “wind” the name you call
and when I came over your hose
you got angry and call me snow,
when thirsty went looking for me
but you never wanted then to see
I wasn’t rain but tears of God.
He gave all that you could wish,
look what you did with the wood
that grew to give you the shadows,
with it you went and made a cross
as a way of thanks to the Father
you made your world even darker
when taking the live of His Son.
According to an ancient legend
I become from nothing a soul
that would wander incessantly
looking for truth as you should,
because living in a world of lies
will make man ever more blind,
he wouldn’t see edge of perdition.
After entering another millennium…
ethereal I am, and yet very strong,
inside every one of all His children
only you can let Him forever down,
a Father losing any son will cry
with an ever aching divine heart
as He see coming near, Armageddon.
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|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Man is a rebelling soul and it will take the interceding power of Light to change not only this world but man and his way of thought...
nice work Georg...
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
All I can add now is that the human being must wake up before the the FLOOD OF BLOOD starts.
Outstanding Mytheologic-Ontologic-Teleological poetic task duly accomplished.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by 000 000
|A remarkable truth and your captivating write gives us a reason to try harder|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Everyone has said it all Georg! a prescient poem masterfully written,takes my breath away! Kudo's!|
|Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
|Stark piece, Georg. Frightening stark.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|very masterful write that echoes the sentiments of many
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Whispers of a wise pen! Wonderful|
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|And as old as you are, bro', God ain't got too long to wait on you...e|
|Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford
|I hope everyone reads this Georg; it contains great wisdom. If only mankind will heed it. But, I fear most have their heads buried in the sands of 'everything will be okay' too deeply.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most power message write Georg!!
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|Every word a weight of Biblical proportions, the four horsemen are us, destroying all, and each other, the scale has already tipped to far. A good example in the land, the birth of Gods son, and his crucifixion, where he preached " LOVE" and gave his life, there is the last place that message has yet to be accepted, even the Christians are fighting on his temple mount. The link of life has been broken also, with all his creatures, that we used and abused, Love never happened there, except a few, there should be much preaching and admonition daily, on his pulpit, should there not?
You have said it all, and you have expressed it in beauty and wisdom,
Bless you my friend! Jasmin Horst
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|Change must come, as is prophesied, your words are for all to see and heed His warnings to those needing to prepare...and PREPARE we must, be on guard and encompass the fear of Him, as the tool to motivate ourselves...in Florida many "prepare" for the violent storms, all must prepare now, for another storm! I truly hope we all have enough light to see us through this "tunnel vision" Lord knows who will stand already...Is it us?
Excellent pen, Georg...our minds are running parallel my dear friend...
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|Excellent write George and a true message to all. Love and hugs, Bonnie|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|A powerful write my friend, a thought that lingers on the minds of many. The bible is being fulfilled daily...the most important thing is to be ready and expecting His return. Well done!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|How long will God wait? Even so, Come Lord Jesus ... powerfully penned sadness, Georg, well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|God help us; that's all I can say....
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|What will be the straw that breaks the camel's back?|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Thank you for sharing Georg, words that truly touch, knowing that at the end yes God is still waiting.
Newfie hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines
|Right on, Georg! Right now, I am watching the Gaza situation on CNN. Rockets blowing up things on both sides. Around the world, people are watching. Leaders of nations are watching. All of them are muttering about how "difficult" this is. Not one person is raising a finger to solve the problem. We encourage our Armageddon with every moment that we only wait and watch. And, as you said so well, God is still waiting.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Tunnel Vision - a very good way to describe the human condition, and after all this time on earth, we seem unable to break out of that tunnel and seek the light. And many now do believe that Armageddon rapidly approaches. I wonder how many will be ready for it.|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|EXCELLENT!!!!!!! ONE OF THE BEST POEMS!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|