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I whispered wrong!
by Sandi Lyn Schraut
Saturday, May 08, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.

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A whimsical view of life

I find the sun burns upside down

The stars burn bright each day

And jabborwacky’s laugh with glee

To hear the mountains play

The sound I hear is corn agrowin

And birds a sittin down

And when the bunnys tongues go waggin

I hear the monkeys say

Oh where did laughter go today?

And why are rivers running dry?

It taxes sensibility to see

The trees go dancing by

Yet on a mountain top

so cold and pearly white

a kite with many colors floats

with whiskey on its breath

be careful what your dreams tell you

for many are but figments

the truth is that I cannot do

a million things this instant

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Reviewed by Paul Judges	5/10/2010

Very good, Sandi !




Reviewed by Amber Moonstone	5/9/2010

Very well said my friend! We all need to slow down and move one step at a time toward our destiny. I loved reading this, thank you for sharing! Much peace, love, and light, Amber "V"




Reviewed by Sandie Angel	5/8/2010

I love the ending. The kite with many colors speaks volume about many good things. Sandie Angel :o)




Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe	5/8/2010

Well done. A pleasure to read. And it's true, one cannot do a million things this instant. Baby steps is what it's about, but still they have to be taken in the direction you want to go.




Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater	5/8/2010

The answer is blowin' in the wind, the pace of life twirling just about right on one of those whimsical fish Amish windvanes, I whispered wrong shows us the pace of life displays itself in those times we can capture a hat on a cat or a Dr. Seuss Cat in the Hat...yea, we're aware of all these things you mention, but you're right "the truth is that I cannot do a million things this instant". Happy Mothers Day, Sandi! And what a line this is! "a kite with many colors floats with whiskey on its breath" Love, Sage




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	5/8/2010

For some reason, your poem makes me think of "Alice in Wonderland." Interesting, Sandi. Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes, Regis

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