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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
11/12/2003 |
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| This flows effortlessly and touches deep within... Excellent write! |
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| Reviewed by sonja lewis |
11/2/2003 |
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very good write keep up the good work
lots more coming our I hope
Lots of luck and love to ya
Sonja |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/28/2003 |
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(((josie)))
i have missed you, girl
stay safe out there in california--all those fires *GOD*
beautiful, beautiful write BRAVA, my lady, a keeper
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
10/26/2003 |
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| This is beautiful Josey, touches the heart. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/25/2003 |
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Touche the heart with this!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by L M (Reader) |
10/25/2003 |
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| Beautiful verses. |
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
10/25/2003 |
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| Beautiful poem, I love how it can be comprehended in different ways! ~Z~ |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) |
10/25/2003 |
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Very good poem .
"reached out felt knew
that you were gone
and there were no tears
no release no help
just the smell
washing me in you" |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/24/2003 |
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| i inhaled this poem effortlessly... an excellent write! |
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| Reviewed by Rodney Bohen |
10/24/2003 |
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Jose,
Unusual, breathtaking and mysterious...
One of the finest pieces I have ever
had the pleasure of reading! I salute you....
Rodney Evan Bohen
just the smell
washing me in you
your scent
that is
really
my
own |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
10/24/2003 |
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oh this is so
i don't know......personal...yet universal
wow
its great
pax
A |
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| Reviewed by Rodd Jokre |
10/24/2003 |
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| Oh... ;( plucked a chord in my heart... ;) Thanks for sharing Jo... |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
10/24/2003 |
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| Gosh this is sad Josephing...I can relate to this..could be of a lost love or a someone lost to death...very well written expression of sorrow either way..floria |
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