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| Reviewed by Rodd Jokre |
11/14/2003 |
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Girl, I REALLY enjoyed this one... THanks for sharing...
Rodd |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
11/14/2003 |
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Sounds perfect as a description for "Father Time." Will certainly be tracking more of your work.
blessin's,
cynth'ya lewis reed |
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| Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore |
11/13/2003 |
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| you captured the eternal moment with this piece, poet. just one glimpse brought all of that knowledge...very well done. |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
11/12/2003 |
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| So full of emotion and expressed very well. |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
11/5/2003 |
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very creative,
a feeling like
"i've been there before" |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
11/5/2003 |
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Josie,
This is so deep and full of much meaning, oh each verse, each word...a grain of sand within itself to explore! Excellant Write!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
11/5/2003 |
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| Josie, this is great |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
11/4/2003 |
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(((josie)))
o, this is outstanding--one of your best
i'm putting this gem into my library *thank you*
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
11/4/2003 |
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| Super write, Josie; glad to be reading you again! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Rodney Bohen |
11/4/2003 |
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Josefina,
I am simply awed.....
Rodney Evan Bohen
falling
grains of memories
smiling faces
laughter
sorrow
pain
tumbling against each other
pushing through the portal
freefall granules
of yesterdays |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
11/4/2003 |
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| This is the one! |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
11/4/2003 |
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Wonderfully-written and flows very well.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/3/2003 |
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Very well written... as always Josie!!
Love Tinka |
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