|Reviewed by Rodd Jokre
|Girl, I REALLY enjoyed this one... THanks for sharing...
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya firstname.lastname@example.org
|Sounds perfect as a description for "Father Time." Will certainly be tracking more of your work.
cynth'ya lewis reed
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|you captured the eternal moment with this piece, poet. just one glimpse brought all of that knowledge...very well done.|
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|So full of emotion and expressed very well.|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
a feeling like
"i've been there before"
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
This is so deep and full of much meaning, oh each verse, each word...a grain of sand within itself to explore! Excellant Write!
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Josie, this is great|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
o, this is outstanding--one of your best
i'm putting this gem into my library *thank you*
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Super write, Josie; glad to be reading you again! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D|
|Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
I am simply awed.....
Rodney Evan Bohen
grains of memories
tumbling against each other
pushing through the portal
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|This is the one!|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Wonderfully-written and flows very well.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very well written... as always Josie!!