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Tiny Whisper Tick by Josephine M Bohen Tuesday, February 10, 2004 Share Print Save Become a Fan
I have a present for you sit here this is something my mom gave to me I was about five she said it wasn't expensive but I kept it all these years I want you to have it and he opened a little plastic box ornate dusty cream and lovely pulled out a watch held it arms length and I saw the memory on his face all the memories of seeing this timepiece packing it here and there waiting for the wrist that would cherish understand how cool it is does it work maybe and we wind and I put it next to my ear and hear the tiny whisper tick the whir of wakeup life in the tiny coils within how cool is that all these years packed and carted saved for me a present for me careful appreciative boy of five my husband do you really like it do I really like it wow how could I not? how indeed could I not?

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Reviewed by Rodney Bohen	4/1/2004

Josefina, Charming..................... Rod




Reviewed by Larry Skahill (Reader)	2/11/2004

very warm




Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner	2/11/2004

(((josie))) my friend, it is so nice to see you back where you belong a beautiful write that evokes such pleasant feelings--thanks for the memory jog :) ((((((HUGS)))))) and love, karla. :)




Reviewed by Tami Ryan	2/10/2004

How, indeed. What a wonderful nostalgic write. Enjoyed this much, thank you.