|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Beautifully written and formed Amira! Your daughter has good taste;-) I did a couple similar some time back. It really enhances certain types of poems as it did this one.
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|Intense rendering of an intense moment, somewhat like a slow-motion rupture in time. Thanks for sharing such a great poem.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|well composed ... nice flow!|
|Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
|I like this great write. Thanks again for stopping by my den earlier..
(( Hugs And Love, JoAnne ))
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Usually don't care for the gimmick poetry, but in this case I found that it added somewhat to the feel and mood of the poem, which was/is quite good in itself.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A stronly emotive and meaningful, creation. I also appreciate your daughter concrete poetic effects. Thank you. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
|i also love playing with layout like this. cleverly and carefully done, ty|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
Your daughter is a great choreographer of words...as you are too !
You express deep emotion and sentiment in this unique and innovative style..
It is a pleasure and delight to savor and enjoy your stimulating and expansive words and thoughts, dear Amira...:)
Love and Blessings
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Lovely, creative and smotional poem. Your daughter is right with her design of your words. Your words touch me too.