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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/6/2006 |
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Beautifully written and formed Amira! Your daughter has good taste;-) I did a couple similar some time back. It really enhances certain types of poems as it did this one.
Love
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
4/6/2006 |
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Intense rendering of an intense moment, somewhat like a slow-motion rupture in time. Thanks for sharing such a great poem.
Aberjhani |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/6/2006 |
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| well composed ... nice flow! |
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| Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) |
4/6/2006 |
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I like this great write. Thanks again for stopping by my den earlier..
(( Hugs And Love, JoAnne )) |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
4/6/2006 |
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| Usually don't care for the gimmick poetry, but in this case I found that it added somewhat to the feel and mood of the poem, which was/is quite good in itself. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/6/2006 |
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A stronly emotive and meaningful, creation. I also appreciate your daughter concrete poetic effects. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Candy T (Reader) |
4/6/2006 |
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| i also love playing with layout like this. cleverly and carefully done, ty |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
4/6/2006 |
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Amira
Your daughter is a great choreographer of words...as you are too !
You express deep emotion and sentiment in this unique and innovative style..
It is a pleasure and delight to savor and enjoy your stimulating and expansive words and thoughts, dear Amira...:)
Love and Blessings
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
4/6/2006 |
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Lovely, creative and smotional poem. Your daughter is right with her design of your words. Your words touch me too.
Susan |
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