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Remembering Tomorrow
by Peter J Benson

Sunday, September 24, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Unfinished, need help else I'll go nuts finding examples

Remembering Tomorrow



I’ve having a hard time remembering tomorrow.
Old ways blending into new ways.
Clicking on a keyboard
And saying that I write
I’m having a hard time remembering tomorrow.

I’m having a hard time remembering tomorrow.
Organic food with a John Deere harvester.
Walking along a canal path
Tarmacadamned for the bikers.
I’m having a hard time remembering tomorrow.

I’m having a hard time remembering tomorrow.
Re-enacting wars while children still die.
Yesterdays uniforms and today’s death count.
I’m having a hard time remembering tomorrow.
 


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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/25/2006
Sometimes it is easier to forget than to remember....if that make sense...you have no problem..lol!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Joyce Hale 9/25/2006
I like this very much, Peter! Very much!

Peace. Joyce
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 9/25/2006
Shoot! I'm having trouble remembering today.

Love it!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 9/24/2006
Hi Peter:

You can avoid having to repeat the same lines over and over again. In my HUMBLE opinion, you could easily just place it in the beginning, for example:

I’m having a hard time remembering tomorrow -

After the dash you can just place your 3 stanzas WITHOUT repeating those lines.

I hope this helps.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)



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