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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/25/2006 |
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Sometimes it is easier to forget than to remember....if that make sense...you have no problem..lol!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Hale |
9/25/2006 |
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I like this very much, Peter! Very much!
Peace. Joyce |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
9/25/2006 |
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Shoot! I'm having trouble remembering today.
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
9/24/2006 |
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Hi Peter:
You can avoid having to repeat the same lines over and over again. In my HUMBLE opinion, you could easily just place it in the beginning, for example:
I’m having a hard time remembering tomorrow -
After the dash you can just place your 3 stanzas WITHOUT repeating those lines.
I hope this helps.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
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