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Fenceposts
by Peter J Benson
Monday, May 18, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Tap
Fresh air and a new plank in place.
New pine replacing the decaying past
Ssst
As the post digger bited the earth.
Moist soil moving
So the solid post stays grounded.
Huff
While the heart gathers for the next effort.
Old posts stay strong
As new planks keep them in place.
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| Reviewed by Brian Hartford (Reader) |
5/19/2009 |
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| Well crafted write. Seems to put everything in order. Maybe that is why Jesus chose to be a Carpenter! Good to see you writing again. Dora say's "hello". |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
5/19/2009 |
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Hi Peter, I like how you write the message in this bottle! You are strong, and hope you are doing well and staying happy... missed your writings.... life, huh? plank by plank...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
5/18/2009 |
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Love the grasping p's, g's and t's as proprophetic, with the first three lines of this piece - Trap, Ssst, Huff, ending with a placement of self, sad, right now.
Hope I typed this right, Peter. :)
Yours,
Stardancer |
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