|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|As a grand vignette of reality...this is so full of imagery and wonderful in its rhyme scheme.|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|I can smell the autumn air already!! It's my favorite time of year!
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|This is great I am sorry it took me so long to read this, to find this, like I said you have made a fan out of me, well done
In Christs Love
|Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
|some good descriptions here, Paul. How exciting to live in Yorkshire. I suppose you have visited the Brontes old parsonage. They were a tragic brilliant family. Imagine watching your family die before you like their father did.|
|Reviewed by Jennifer Lawson Zepeda
|Beautiful poem loaded with incredible imagery. I delighted in the sensory experiences; feeling, tasting, CARING! Thank you!
And I LOVE your profile photo.
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
Love this poem, Paul!
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|I love everthing about this beautiful slice of life poem|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|This one is a bounty of senses and passion. I see it all, smell the aromas and get goosebumps from the quiet chill.
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Reviewed by jude forese
|smooth, colorful and gentle ...|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Perhaps "last" but not least
of the summer season...
is your insightful poem!!
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|I loved enjoying the seasons with you as I read your poem. Just lovely.
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|I love the interweaving of season and family, Paul. Wonderful piece! ~Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|I am fine with the transitional seasons, autumn and spring -- it is the solitude and unwelcoming outcast arms of winter that bites deeply into mu soul -- stark, appearing lifeless and lasting for what seems an eternity -- the wolves teeth of bitter cold is not the friend of human flesh- trees were surely meant to be green or flowering, not naked and starkly brown and gray -- winter, if I had my way, you'd be held forever at bay -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This is lovely, Paul; I can so easily imagine myself there through your verses. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|A beautiful depiction of life greeting the changing seasons as one settles down for the pending winter to come...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Absolutely charming, Paul!
|Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
|Excellent write about the shifting of the seasons. But I especially enjoyed the phrase, "in the pie we could taste both warmth and rain." How insightful --- My senses would have never overtly recognized the combination of warmth and rain. Enjoyed, R|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Enjoyed this poetic walk through a wonderful season...well done Paul.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Your words took us from season to season Paul in a sad yet beautiful way filled with bright beautiful colours.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|It's the gentleness of your reflective
style that always appeals to me, Paul.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|The last days of summer always sadden me a little, but those exquisite colours before the big freeze are spectacular to behold.|