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In Reality
by Mary Terzian
Sunday, January 11, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Crushed dreams after a break-up

In Reality

“Sorry,” you said, “bye”,

And abandoned ship,

As if our friendship

Was only a lie.

“Did you ever care”?

I wondered aloud,

Searching for memoirs

Of the man I loved.

Ghosts of sentiments

In a twilight dance;

Strings of instruments

Of discordant sounds;

Wishes, illusions

Heaped into a mound;

Unrequited love

Was all I could find.

“Where are you”? I screamed,

Echoes filled the air,

It was just my dream,

You were never there.

October 2008

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Reviewed by Annabel Sheila	5/20/2009

Wow! Powerful poem. Break-ups are such traumatic events. You echoed my feelings when I went through a divorce. Indeed "he was never there". Good job Mary.




Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle	1/12/2009

A well written poem on the harsh reality of a breakup.Stay strong Mary,take care Edwin

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