A old Roundtable friend (Enemy?) would chastize me for most anything, but more likely a lack of originality. I wrote this as rebute of sorts, and it sounded typical of my style and grasp, so I decided to display it. lgl
The disruptable Train of Thought So utterly irregular to what was taught, Could it be massive Freight Great mass and fraught With all forms of Images taut; Or a Passenger Express with naught But clouded Visions ill-fought In the Darkness of that sought..
Igli - interesting and profound ..... make it longer next time. Don't know anything about modern poetry but thought 'Freight' at the end of line three thankfully made your poem unpredictable.