|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Ahhhhhhhh... so sorry you have to feel like this at all Michael!
Great write tho' and...
She should be apart of your heart and mind!
YOu lOved her!
For whatever reason it all happen
We all learn something!
Be stronger and be wiser still!
Good things will come out of this nill
Take up a hobbie, your new love interest could be waiting
or time will heal itself, and changes may occur suddenly...
Head up and know writing is helping and healing!
Be Happy still!
Your poem said it all, brokenhearts do mend!
PeACE, and Warm HuGs,Lady Sheeeoox
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Feeling the pain as much as you do my friend. Keep the the candle of hope burning, there will be a time when all shall be right.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|hope it mends soon, Michael ... we all have moments of weakness ...|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Well told, but very sad, write away the pain pax A|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Well written poem about a very emotional subject. Emotions can be felt within the write, for it is written from the heart which makes it an even richer write! Enjoyed!
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Well done indeed...Hugsssssssss|
|Reviewed by Erin Woods
|Micheal...I know this place well...Hope you are feeling stronger soon....This is written from the heart...well done ! ...Speedy healing...erin|
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|It's so painful and heartfelt write
I felt your pain as I read each stanza
Your choice of words have painted a
Perfect picture and Imagery you
Captured the emotions of a broken heart
I can't even Imogen how deep you are hurting
You have my friendship and prayers!!
Excellent poetic feelings written from the heart!!
Love And Peace To You Always your
Friend..Morning Star...SMILE and get back saddle!!
A broken heart will hea
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|It is difficult, but we must live in the moment, don't look back, your next will be even better, until you meet her ENJOY THE FREEDOM...|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Michael this is such a heartfelt piece....I can relate mate...although still married...it does not make the pain less...I guess it's worse!!
At times like this I wish death would take over...that it would make things less sore inside for everyone involved!!
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|Michael, I felt this one and I think all of us have felt this way, from time to time. All we can do is to focus on what we stil have and let the rest of it go. Deeply moving, well structured poem.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Sometimes love is like a pricking rash which needs a good massage with the harsh brush of get on with your life.
At first, it hurts like hell, but after a while the pain subsides and the rash is gone.
Your skin are now ready for the next rash!
Falling from love is like falling from a horse, don't think! get on the saddle again.
Sandness and solitude is a bad bad combination.
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|Feelings of sadness permeate your poem, but with flecks of hope for strength and forward motion. I love those flecks, in your poem and in my own life.|