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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
4/4/2007 |
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Richard,
EXCELLENT! Your preception of jealousy is on the nose!
Many blessings,
~Linda |
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| Reviewed by Rose Loya |
3/25/2007 |
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You nailed it,
Rose |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Ryan |
3/10/2007 |
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Well my dear friend, I could have sworn I commented on this when I read it the first time, but I find it tucked into my file of "must read agains"...when I found a sec. I do love the way you do the acrostic. Wow is this smoothly defined within the perameeters and confines of the form...nary a jerk. Webster would be insanely jealous of your creative genius. This is terrific and worth saving.
Love and hugs,
Blueberry
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| Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines |
2/23/2007 |
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Acrostic makes for a tight form and you have handled content so well within the form! Beautifully done. Also love Edward's comment!
Ted |
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| Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci |
2/15/2007 |
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Sublime write
Opening the eyes of
Those willing to
Risk the journey
Under all the layers of
Ego
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
2/14/2007 |
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Nothing more to add.
Excellent!!! |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
2/13/2007 |
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
ohhhhhhhhhhh
Am I glad we are freinds!!! When you deflect, you do it with class.
Jealousy is borderline madness, causes people do shameful things.....
not worth the emotional output. Self esteem, comes from within, but sometimes takes a lifetime to learn...
Low self esteem can cause personal wars.........
so sad
ignore em
:)
you are some writer.........no wonder you have jealous fans.....such a shame tho......
pax A :( |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
2/13/2007 |
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Dear Richard,
Jealousy is a toxic poison to body, mind and spirit. You've described it well in your acrostic.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph* |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
2/13/2007 |
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| Dear Richard, I couldn't agree with you more. Jealousy destroys everything it comes in contact with. A powerful write. Unfortunately it is not just the fact that some lack low self esteem that creates the green-eye monster. Well done! Holly |
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| Reviewed by H. Lena Jones |
2/13/2007 |
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By George, Richard! That's spot-on!
Lena |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
2/13/2007 |
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| Brilliance....... |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
2/12/2007 |
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| interesting poetic view on jealousy, I agree that it is an insecurity that we can do without |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
2/12/2007 |
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the picture is awesome
and the poem hit jealousy right on the head
ugly thing it is and can be to all involved |
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| Reviewed by J M |
2/12/2007 |
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Oh jealously will defeat a person everytime a powerful acrostic Brother Richard...........
Good message.
Wisdom & peace,
Joselyn |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
2/12/2007 |
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I like jallosy winders myself. ;-)
Keen as a knife to cut that sucker from end to end. Did you get him yet?
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
2/12/2007 |
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Rich in understanding. . . .
Targeted and landing. . . .
Direct and commanding.
DWB |
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
2/12/2007 |
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A Fantastic acrostic Richard!
If only, we could just help the jealous ones see this light, and oh, if only, we could just help the jealous one understand...his own...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~ |
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| Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations |
2/12/2007 |
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Jealousy is a sentiment as destructive as corrosive acid, but much less so to the ones it is directed at, than to those who harbour it - for they fail to recognize that the source is, really, within themselves... low self-esteem, insecurities, self-victimization... and yet, also within themselves (and only within themselves) is the power to change it into a source of wholeness. Perfect acrostic, my dear friend, and outstanding analysis.
Love & {{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}}
Alexandra* |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/11/2007 |
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You nailed it Super Chum! Exceptional acrostic!
Love,
Sugar Chum |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
2/11/2007 |
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Well stated, Richard. Your acrostic soars.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
2/11/2007 |
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Jaded ,i.e. Bated By The Self Endowed One's Own Inequities...GREED...
Another Right On Write...
Your Friend TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
2/11/2007 |
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| you've described it perfectly... |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
2/11/2007 |
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| Jealousy is a terrible defect. It can ruin one's life. You descibed it so well. Victor |
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| Reviewed by Pier Tyler |
2/11/2007 |
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| An absolute hammer on the nail truth. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
2/11/2007 |
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A good message to all!!! One should never continue to dwell on yesterdays' failure. One should always continue to move forward and looking toward commitments for tomorrows. Who cares if anyone fails yesterdays, it's the success in one's future that counts most.
Wonderful write with a great message!!!!!
Sandie May Angel :o)
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
2/11/2007 |
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Yes sir! There's mothing worse than a jaded slice of acid from someone who blames another for their lack of self esteem. You always round the eqations off nicely with words.
Love and great slices of hamony along your way.
Susan..aka Le Belle of hearts. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/11/2007 |
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Excellent Big Brother of mine!!
Love Sissy Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Michael Mathieu |
2/11/2007 |
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To let go of past doings a hard feat to accomplish sometimes,Excellent
Michael |
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| Reviewed by Ann Marquette |
2/11/2007 |
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amazing how our experiences affect our sense of reality,our ability or inability to interpret others
ann |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/11/2007 |
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| a fine acrostic delving into an introspective account of the state of mind that can only adhere to its own shortcomings ... well done, Richard .... |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
2/11/2007 |
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| Very Good! |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
2/11/2007 |
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| Low self-esteem seems to be a world wide problem, me included, but Rufuz knows how good he is...Ed |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen (Reader) |
2/11/2007 |
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| astute psychology! I like how this flows smoothly...it's not choppy like many acrostics (my own included!). |
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