|Reviewed by Elizabeth Parsons
|I can only add an echo of what has already been said here, Taylor. A beautiful art poem that invites the senses to experience the moment as though we were there. Beautiful imagery, soft, and deliciously sensual. Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by Chuck Keller
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|I loved it! French-milled huh, Yes! Those soaps are very creamy and smooooth... YOur poem is so richly done from your Soul Taylor! It is truly GREAT! WArm HuGs, Sheee - YOur words stuns me - WOW! As rains cleanses! I felt a cleansing reading this delightful- romantic Vintage poem!|
|Reviewed by Butch Howard
|My immediate impression upon reading the first stanza was seeing the rich visual imagery and descriptions of the marble and brick and the way you connected them to the tactile senses: "the creamy travertine swirls" and marble, "lovingly laid, tumbled buttery soft and wet, between paired naked feet" and "the silken luster of polished stone" It put me there in that steamy place where loving passion intensifies the heat and steam within this piece. There is a sense of deja vu here that creates a longing in us to return to those glorious moments. Then the olfactory and sense of taste are brought into play, which converge with the already heightened senses of intense pleasure: "soothed by the pristine quiet of his lips in kiss and the sweet-honeyed taste of her who by his hands French-milled cleansed in irresistible scent" It is a gentle, passionate and powerfully written poem which stirs mind body and soul -outstanding!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Makes me think of the soft warmth of Sardinian marble together with the exotic heavy scent of French hand-cut Provencal soaps... Heady and yet cool and lush at the same time... like that "special" time of dawning! :)) You capture both intimacy and freshness beautifully and with such delicacy here. Like an island sunrise. I like ! TY K xx|
|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|wish i were there for those scents cheers|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Beautiful write, I love the imagery...and the choice of words allowed the poem to be read almost as a recipe, a recipe for love...great job!
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Hard to find words. . .even the type is beautiful. You chose the perfect illustration, the perfect font, the perfect words, the
perfect phrases. Oo-la-la!!! Love rain, love what you have done with it. . .sound you hear is all of us sighing with happiness. 'Pea' <3
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
This write flows like a fine rich red wine over the palate of the senses. You seem to be developing a certain sophistication with this style you have embraced. And you also find a remarkable symbiosis between the visual and the written.
Well done, and thanks also for your insightful words ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|It is as though you have replicated the painting with your words, Taylor. Well done. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|I love dancing in the rain,well excuted|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
The art reminded me of one I did...posted on this page...art piece 21 Gazing!!
|Reviewed by Miss Pandora
|Your work Taylor never fails to take me somewhere unique and exhilerating. You are an inspired writer with a dexterous pen! I really like this style - loved this much. How's the cough ;) ;D Much love as ever, Panda:)|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Some thunder and lightning detected in this rain dance. Oh, the fresh scent of the earth after the storm.
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Well conceived and delivered.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent imagery and motif ...|
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|Soft, silky, and sensual... it does get much better than that! Your words are penned with such delicacy, my friend...with the lightest touch. EXQUISITE!!!
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|Definitely sensual. I love the "rising steam" and "caustic caress."
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Great images of morning glory...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Oh my Taylor! this is absolutely exqusite imagery! A poem that raises love to the higher level where it belongs. Brava! You are a poet that delves into the essence!
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|This is a beautiful poem, Taylor. Sensual, soft and flowing. Just beautiful!
|Reviewed by J M
|This is so passionate and delicate beautiful imagery...|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Oh the mornings are the passionate times as love awakens new. You wrote in a lustful whisper ,my friend ,and you pen the luxury of sensual beginnings we all treasure. This is beautiful as only a woman could pen