Greengate
by Patrice D'Ambra Burdette --Pataliyah
Thursday, May 18, 2006
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Embrace: The green gate we enter. |
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Greengate
We name it embrace this blasting of our insular track of being-- the convergence of two random points on a plane like beads trucking down a cosmic curve to reach at last the end of their infinite and solitary whirring
A gaze that meets, bores inward that which you look up and capture in the lens-box of your brain, behind your knowing that precise moment (too terrible) the beginning, middle, end of each click further in You nod, regarding the people out for a stroll, passing into forever, every delineative step the sweet repository of days collected, Days of Awe Days of Desolation
I pour, I pour... Thou--my ritual of breath, I swallow in gobbets insatiable as your pour back into me, our fingers entwine as newly spittled eyes first seeing, cleave to every grain packed full of this touchstone, capstone lodestone filament of a true , entirely credible presence--- This: skin in skin
I watch for your form silent in my corner, peer tremulous and child-like marvel at the steady invasion of this membrane round with the stuff of you
For such is the manner of your blessedness: secretive incendiary boon -dunamis incarnate clanging silver anvils behind my eyes the crush of something cool and sweet on my tongue to lap and dissolve the elegance of our patterned bliss
Escapes my reason as if I had ever known enough as If I could ever say I now have all I desire
Give me no more nights of abundance this savage opulence, lavish as honey palpable as its slow glide from my chin No, no more dawn-thunder slow rumble of sighings
I shall wonder then, as if I could not have known, nor had further need of a request this one last, my love simply new eyes for glutting a new creed to intone.
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
5/20/2006 |
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Pataliyah . . .
Once again you have touched a sensitive nerve. I believe there is a sinister danger, though, associated with becoming too introspective in our passionate pursuits.
Estrangement from the very source that feeds us!
There is an inescapable and humorous irony associated with pursuing authorship and poetry. One must be deeply introspective to reveal the gift, ferociously disciplined to develop the gift, diligent and fearless to display the gift, and forever hopeful that upon the revealing, there is understanding and acceptance.
"To lap and dissolve the elegance of our patterned bliss" is at once painfully obvious and also hopelessly cryptic.
You have created a mysterioius bridge I believe, as a poet, that illuminates the mysteries of staid physical love and spiritual enlightenment, and most importantly the heartrending cries of bringing the two into some form of symbiotic fulfillment.
As always your work is captivating and I come away feeling nourished!
Respectfully
Richard |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/19/2006 |
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Mesmerizing poetry, Patrice. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by William DeVault |
5/18/2006 |
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| wonderous in its spiritual and emotional content, it flows, it sings. it is poetry. I am charmed. |
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