by Ronald W. Hull
Sunday, May 31, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A little nonsense with a utopian flair.
Aquarius rising once again, bubbling
from the equinox in the Land of Zen.
Monotonous monks drone to the sound,
of row, row… row your boat, a round.
Syncopated synapses sing singsong,
dance in the twilight of summer long.
Cerebral Cyclopes close one eye strain,
dancing the dervish down the deepest drain.
Of flower-powered vehicles vying for vain,
whirly gigging on the Ruby Ridge in the rain.
Forest of copulating capillaries chlorophyll,
green grows the oxygen air of the still.
In your pure and naked wondrous wile,
laid bare in the sunshine of your smile.
Copyright 2009 © Ronald W. Hull
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|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|You nut! I see images of Matchstick Men, Strawberry Alarm Clocks and Crimson and Clover while I'm Dancing In The Moonlight in Itchicoo Park. Flashback? Thanks for the chuckles, Ron...
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|this one was REALLY original and unexpected. I enjoyed the colorful images and metaphors. Your talent is always full of surprises.|
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|Great poem,I enjoy reading this,take care
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|Enjoyed much this pen..Lady J|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Ron a riotous run of fun really!;-) loved the alliteration,too...
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|This is just wonderful, very lively, very witty....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by H Cruz
|Reviewed by jude forese
|firstly, the rhyming couplets work very well for you ... the alliteration is smooth and works well within the body of the poem and the motif is whimsically quite syntactically stimulating ...|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I want the same acid you're dropping...;-) Ed|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|What a delightful moment you have provided me here, Ron. I enjoyed every line and also your wit.
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|"Forest copulating capillaries chlorophyll, green grows the oxygen air of the still" -- now there is a scientific wonder dripping with humor and plantly lust -- this is way cool Ron -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|