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Carpets of Gold
by Ronald W. Hull

Sunday, September 22, 2002
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Carpets of Gold


Ages old, these carpets of gold.
Cover the valley floor.

Soften the scene,
The stream’s careen,
Gently, as before.

A trillion times over,
The trees did inflame,
Released their load,
Like gentle rain.

To a restless bed,
A fountain head, under the trees,
Blown about by fickle breeze.

We lie as before on this soft, warm cushion.
Making love to the water’s percussion.

As the warm sun brings a sweat of skin,
And we lie languid amid the din.

Of bees buzzing in the late afternoon.
Hurry, …Winter will come soon.



Copyright 2002 © Ronald W. Hull


8/18/02



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Reviewed by richard poor 11/26/2002
you have given me my memory of the fall...tanks,,,,,,
Reviewed by Victor Jensen 9/24/2002
I'm not the world's best poet but I do know good poetry when I read it.
Reviewed by A. Hack (Reader) 9/24/2002
Sweet imagery. Good read.
It's all warm and cozy.

Much enjoyed,
Krisette
Reviewed by jude forese 9/22/2002
your affect is very effective...
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/22/2002
Beautiful write, Ron!! Thanks for sharing!!
Love and ((HUGS)), your friend, Karen Lynn.
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 9/22/2002
Of course I agree with the others, the work that you have presented is flawless. :) I'd also like to thank you for your comments on 'First Haircut' It was me in fact. At 43 I've overcome the abuse but I still write about it and hope that some don't feel so alone. You are a kind man. Thank you.

Warmest Regards, Janet xoxoxo
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 9/22/2002
i agree with all here......dreamy ballad steamy mist of passion!!!!
Reviewed by John Hutchinson 9/22/2002
Very good-I can see the carpets forming here across the valley outside my window.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 9/22/2002
I think this is one of your best works. Good choice of words...as a dreamy qualilty to it. ~E
Reviewed by R Kimberley 9/22/2002
Sparkling with beauty.
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader) 9/22/2002
Excellent autumn scenery. We should enjoy while we can.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 9/22/2002
Mmmm painted a lovely picture of nature and love.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 9/22/2002
Nice pic and great poem, Ron! I can see the carpet of gold in the pic. Great to see you're writing again!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)
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