by Ronald W. Hull
Sunday, June 20, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Sea Breeze I
Carol M. Sax
She drifted in with the tide,
a soft night ride, by my side.
To flutter in my ear,
like a butterfly so near.
I can taste her sweet nectar,
doing justice as I reflect her,
in the mirror of my mind,
from the front, and behind.
She floats like that butterfly,
on the tip of a tail wind.
And sings as she floats,
a song never penned.
She breezes in and breezes out,
planting thoughts and leaving doubt.
Enchanting like a fairy princess,
slaying my heart, defenseless.
Breezy is the name I gave her,
easy are the thoughts that claim her,
it is so hard to blame her,
when they do not come true .
And so I leave the window open,
and hope that she will come.
And ease my heart before it's broken,
or at least, leave a token.
Copyright 2010 © Ronald W. Hull
She's Cool, This Breeze
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|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Soothing and dreamy. Patrick|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|ethereal sensuality coolly defined ...|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Ron this is an exquisite poem. Lovely poignant thoughts encased in perfect flow.|
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Delightful poem, Ronald|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|dreamy for sure....i really like this...patmedlin|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|She sounds like Mohammad Ali as she "floated like a butterfly" & did she also "sting like a bee"...;-) ed|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|I really enjoyed this one, Ronald....you captured the essence of the lovely picture.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Such an engaging write, Ron; bittersweetly whimsical and dreamy feelings are awakened within me as I read. Thank you. Love and peace to you,