|Reviewed by Dante Feenix
|Wow! You are amazing... I was reading your bio and all I can say is wow! But also, I really love this poem "still waters of your soul" that is classic worthy! "Mortal coil" Write on brotha, WRITE ON...|
|Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)
|Ron, this is such a wonderful gift of yourself, your love and devotion to that special one..So hard to find these days...Your words are well placed in a beautiful frame of devotion..
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|A poem as lovely as the girl in the picture.|
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|I can't but echo what all have said below - very well done.
She's special - the ONE.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing this lovely "love song" which expresses much and awakens thoughts and emotions. I am happy to "say" that I can relate, Ron. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|a lovely tribute just not too sure about the last 4 lines. hmmm
'anointing and ending her toil'....puts dark visions of compassionately or not, putting someone out of their misery. hmmm
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|What a beautiful testimony of love! The One...
And we know "The One" when we find them, you write love prose with much beauty and feeling behind it. I do have to laugh about the chicken though :)
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
|Lovely thoughts in your poem, Ron.
Regarding my poem, The Blue Vase, I wonder if it's because so many women work today and just don't have time for the paraphernalia of yesterday? Which is a pity.
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|I AM HAPPY FOR YOU, RONALD AND I AM DOUBLY HAPPY FOR HER. MUCH BLESSINGS, LOVE AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Let nothing come between a man and his chicken! ;-)Patrick|
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|I like the ending here, the last six lines. They carry it all past the 'here' to the 'beyond here'; and I read it that the 'voice' of the poem goes first to the Great Beyond, and receives the dedicatee (you) of this poem, which is the ultimate comfort, isn't it? ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a wonderful testimonial to your enduring love ...|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|It's a lucky man who can honestly say these verses. Welcome to the club, my friend. Dick|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|So much love in your words.....sigh....beautifully penned, Ronald!
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|"One" so fortunate *Ron* to be
the subject of these great vows!!!!
|Reviewed by Ed J.
|Sounds like you are a very lucky man. Well written and obviously with much love.
Stay well and keep writing
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
some of the most eloquent vows
i've ever had the pleasure of reading;
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|This is beautifully written with so much tenderness!! You are kind.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|This is well stated dude, but I have to say that the guy who wrote this is one "HEN"pecked fellow and I can only advise that you get therapy ASAP...LOL, e|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Words spoken so tenderly as this is beautifully written Laura
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is utterly breathtaking, Ron, and you sure know how to express your innermost feelings to the girl you love!
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Ron, you succeed in describing real love, love beyond the "I do" and "'till death do we part" love - you've reached into the applicable core values of, love - the "for you are in my heart, and you are in my soul" Rod Steward declaration of love - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|A truth oath of love wrapped in loyalty.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|The sincerity and beauty in this avowal is breathtaking, Ron. Makes standard marriage vows seem impoverished by comparison.
To soothe me when I'm sick,
to nurture me in health.
Be one with me in poverty,
and carry me to wealth.
... this is a love that supercedes "for richer, for poorer" indeed. Fabulous stuff and wonderful to share in. Bless you both! :)) xx
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|With relationship history filling books today, it's rewarding to read of one that is obviously of a transcendence only the parties involved need to understand.|