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Seasonal Adjustment Disorder
by Nicky Goodman
Saturday, November 17, 2007
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Seasonal Adjustment Disorder

The air of this November day is warm, the cool breeze
chills, the sea swells. Surf's up - tide's high enough
for the crash of waves, low though, so the roll and drag
conundrums the beach. Sea's coming in, stones are polished,
shells broken, mountains become sand - a gang of parrots
shelling pine-cones, a flock of gulls caw, and a herd
of speckled beach towels didn't budge an inch.



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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
I think you captured things effectively... ...and shared them well. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
The natural order of things I would say, lovely piece...

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Thanks both - i have cut the lines which had something to do with the title! -lol - so i'm a bit stumped at the mo *twiddles pencil* thanks very much for ideas :) xx
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
You kicked ass with this poem which took me there, dodging the seagulls . . . er . . . dropping . . . Title? November Day . . .
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
I like this, Nicky, very visual. Excellent.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Maybe "Beach Towels" for a title?
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