An aside
by Nicky Goodman
Tuesday, May 06, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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(why is there a category here for Golf, for example, and not a category for Love?)(this has little to do with the poem and is just a question)(thanks for reading:) |
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(An aside)
(Stepping out through gardens,
Mountains, rivers, oceans,
I see gods and goddesses
Going about their everyday affairs;
Somedays, we say hello, and
Somedays I watch from a bench
Believing they can't see me there
Pondering how I'm often like him,
How much I am so like her
And how I have never been)
(c)Apr08
(ed.May,thanks:)
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/6/2008 |
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Beautiful piece from deep within your soul, well said....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
5/6/2008 |
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| It's the pigeon-hole syndrome that plagues our society. Don't you hate it? --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/6/2008 |
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Thought provoking excellence, Nicky, from your multi-talented pen - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
5/6/2008 |
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| Deep. Big time deep. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen (Reader) |
5/6/2008 |
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| I love this, Nicky. It's so 'me'! Ask me daughters - it's all about me. Even your poetry! :) |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
5/6/2008 |
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| Nicky this is so very unique and wistful. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/6/2008 |
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This one has a definate muse feel to it as if your thoughts are sort of just drifting out onto the paper but yet they seem terribly important as well. Lots to ponder.
hugs
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