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  looking back
by Pinckney D Rivers
Friday, September 21, 2007
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a look back at a relationship

You call and I answer.

You complain and I comply.

You left and I was sad.

Now the sun has risen and the flowers bloom again.

How could I not have known you were the cloud on my life?

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Reviewed by Regis Schilken 3/14/2011
I hope your cloud stays away. I'm lucky, my sunshine has fanned over my life for almost 45 years and it is still glowing strong.

Reviewed by John Domino 4/6/2009
Nice poetry!
"Trust in the Lord with all you heart
and lean not to your own understanding.
In all ways, acknowledge Him and
He will direct your paths." Prov. 3:5-6
Reviewed by Liz Cosline 1/5/2009
Reviewed by Joanna Leone 6/19/2008
Your poem is well written, but you have captured an important point in your poem. The sun has risen and the flowers bloom again, as you have said in your poem. Life never ends when someone rejects us. It only helps us to move on to form a stronger and better relationship with another person. It is painful when we must say goodbye, but think of how great it is that you have removed that cloud from the sky. How would you grow if that cloud stayed in your life? A magical poem with so much meaning.
Stop by my authors den if you have a chance, as I have written a poem about a rainbow that I saw once, and it appeared to me at a low point in my life. The power of that rainbow taught me that beauty does shine through, even after a loss.
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 5/9/2008
All go through rejection and it hurts and it was a cloud on our lives. So true your words but we survive and go on again to sunnier days. Love, Lois
Reviewed by Jon Willey 1/22/2008
To everything there is a time and place. Including relationships. A very nice poem. Jon Michael Willey
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 12/31/2007
well done enjoyed the read
Reviewed by Dawn Mullan 11/7/2007
Hindsight is sometimes the only way we can see the negative aspects in our life. Thank you, DL Mullan
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo 9/23/2007
Absolutely melancholic! But filled with hope.

Reviewed by Art Sun 9/21/2007
A very nice work on reflection of past...there is always a brighter day even after the clouds...

nice work.....

Art Sun...
Reviewed by R Beeman 9/21/2007
Suzan, wonderfully put. I can surely relate to that.


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The Followers of the Magdalene Book One of The Magdalene Chronicles series

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