|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Do very true Karen...Some times it's hard to keep a secret though!...M|
|Reviewed by Ken Becula
|The secretive human race; a baby has no secrets but as it gets older the innocence disappears. Behind closed doors, the secretive are being discreet. I love the Leonard Cohen: and your love is a secret all over the block. The paradox is at the heart of many great songs and poems.|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|Secrets destroy... :(
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Love the poem, but I'm not much on secrets. Too complicated. The truth will stand on its own merits. Patrick|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|"secrets are made to be broken" ;) only kiddin ... it takes someone of caliber to keep a secret ...
very well written ...
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Wonderfully expressed, Karen. It is certainly not easy being asked to either keep or receive someone else's secret. What might at the time seem a privilege can, as you say, become more of a torment, one way or another. Strong and clear writing which sets out and clarifies the conundrum well. xx|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|..an old woman asked another "Can you keep a secret?" The other woman answered eagerly "Yes I can!"...then the lady responded in a soft voice "So can I".....lol|
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|how true-and don't we all have secrets-excellent|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Wonderful twists and turns in this gem!
I will never forget how my mother carried all of my own secrets loyally to the very end of her days.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|So you won't be coming to the potting shed tonight?
It is kinda funny, a secret, a secret that everyone knows, but doesn't talk about it until it is realised that it is not a secret. Other than the potting shed ;)
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Karem this one left me pondering and wondering a lot about how much pressure a secret can put on a soul. To keep a secret from one we often have to lie to another...is this the price of a secret. Anyway this is truly a poem to make the reader dig deep and think a lot. Well done.
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|It takes a lot of patience to keep a secret.
Nicely written, my friend!
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)
|Ah secrets are worthless without a worthy person with whom to share them. Luv this piece. < <HUGS>>>Mikii|
|Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti
|Secrets are getting fewer and fewer thanks to the internet.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Some secrets truly do haunt.|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|'The pain of the keeping, or the pain of its truth'------I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|But once someone tells you a secret
its no longer a secret.......
enjoyed your write
Love & Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|Ahhh yes I do agree and you wrote it so very well.
Karen,it is no secret that you write the type of poetry that I want to 'keep.'