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1st man I ever loved
by Lady GoldStar

Thursday, September 07, 2006
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I wrote this poem hours after my father had died. I sat in my bedroom alone, broken, but not yet ready to cry, I saw him when I closed my eyes and realized, just how much I loved him. He was just a man, that made many mistakes in life, but he was my father and I love him and it hurt. Now when I read this poem, I am reminded of where he rest and waits for me.~lady goldstar

My Father, the 1st man I ever loved.

Today on August 23, 2006 your stay here came to and end

At 10:23 a.m., you came to peace and I knew at that moment

your love would never ceases.

The 1st man in my life, you taught me much, about all of life's strife,

full of joys, sorrows and the heart breaks of tomorrows.

You showed me how to endure the storm

and to look to the LORD for our hearts to be warmed.

When life is hard and it gets cold,

you are a fighter, whom weathered the storms,

not on your own accord, but by HIS mercy and grace,

you have taken your rightful place.

Amongst the stars in heaven and in the company of angels,

You are finally free, free, free!

You my Father the 1st man I ever loved...


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Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 1/11/2007
A truly beautiful tribute for your father...sounds like a wonderful person and dad. Your poem is penned from a kind and compassionate heart! Enjooyed, glad I stopped by.
Joyce Bowling
Reviewed by Rachel Dee 1/11/2007
I really like this poem everyone should be so blessed, to write such things about a person, beautiful.
Reviewed by Peter Paton 9/7/2006

He was the first and best man you ever loved or ever will..
God Bless you Lady..

Reviewed by Connie Faust 9/7/2006
It is so, so hard to say goodbye. Yet, you are glad he is free....
Very heartfelt tribute and farewell. You will no doubt be writing more about your father and you.

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