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Broken Bones - Haiku
by Joy Marsh
Friday, May 04, 2007
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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 a dozen soldier's
metal rain collides with sweat
dreadful precision


 

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Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 8/28/2007
Oooh, right on target. Strong and to the point. Powerful. The brevity of this poetic form adds to the abruptness of the death. Excellent. Liz
Reviewed by H. Lena Jones 6/2/2007
Joy, I don't like wars, period. Such a waste of life. How I long for the day when we can all live together in peace and harmony.

Lena
Reviewed by Susan Bailey 5/5/2007
I enjoy Haiku. So much can be said with so few words as you have done here. Well done.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 5/4/2007
The side effects of war! So sad.

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Gloria Buono Daly 5/4/2007
War is so sad and you've penned this sadness with emotion and imagination. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 5/4/2007
So true. Sad! Very well done!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 5/4/2007
Tragic price. Very descriptive..
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 5/4/2007
Joy,

Too many broken bones and shattered lives: a terrible cost to pay for our freedom: our brave men and women in uniform have my respect and gratitude. Well penned sadness.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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