|Reviewed by Horrace Foster
|I like your work as I read it I feel that I can finish every word with you. I love to write but I am not much a reader, but I will be after tonight.|
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|This made me cry, these two lines "I need to absorb a broken promise you're about to do." and "Our little boy will be sad, forlorn, and hurt too"|
|Reviewed by Darryn Murphy
|this is cool - I love it|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
this is one of the most beautiful writes
I've had the Pleasure to read
Thanks for sharing all these wonderful thoughts
Love & peace Be with you
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...with beauty you pen in story...sadness...breaking music of the heart...love...and family. ...instrumental wisdom...that touches ones heart...hears the sadness in notes you so wonderfully penned.
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
|So sad and heartwrenching. It actually made me cry.
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Well done Barbara. The poem song creates a story and takes the reader there. Another song writer is born.....M|
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Barbara Love this lyrics
Your perfectly chosen words capture such
I can even hear the music to this lyrics
Its a very sad song but very real to true life!
Peace Love and light...and hugesss too...Morning star
|Reviewed by Harmony Blyth
|This is a really beautiful poem... sad but beautiful.
I thought it was well written.
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|WOW! The river of your talents runs deep dear Barbara. Lilting rhythmically and it would lend itself to a genre of country ballads quite nicely. Good work!
|Reviewed by Tuchy (Carl) Palmieri
|Barbara A moving song it is a tear jerker
thei needs to sung and recorded
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Definitely has a Country-Western flavor, Barbara!|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Very moving and heartfelt song, makes me want to give you a hug.
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|Splendid song Barbara....sweetly composed...God Bless
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|A beautiful, moving song. Great work. God blesss. JMW|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Beautiful Barbara. Simply beautiful. Nice job.|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my,how beautiful ..well done sweet lady...have a wonderful evening..Hugsssssssss|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|This is a song that should be sung,,,, great job.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Bitter sweet in this potent love poem of love gone sour. All you need is a banjo and a guitar and Reba to sing this and you have a hit Country Western song.|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|This is beautiful Barbara and I can hear it being sung. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Barbara,you are soaring with this gem! I'd love to hear it with music! Beautifully done!
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|Barbara, you are very talented. I can just imagine your song put to music. I bet it would be beautiful. Great write.|
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|Absolutely beautiful song you have written and sung, for I could hear it as I was reading it. Well done my friend, well done. Love, Bonnie|