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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
7/10/2008 |
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| VERY NICE!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
6/29/2008 |
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| A wondrous weaving of words~`* |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
6/26/2008 |
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| this so presses my buttons and touches my chords, Barbara. I can say "yes yes" to every line and identify with each idea you have presented. You speak of that which is finite in terms of that which is eternal and point to the fact that both co-exist in one continuum. A beautifully structured and deeply thoughtful piece which is masterful in the way it connects. TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
6/25/2008 |
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| Beautiful!!! You have captured much of life in this lovely poem. Well done!...M |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
6/23/2008 |
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Another beautiful poem your words
captured the essence of two souls that journey
Through the many roads of life!
Brilliant write excellent message within!!
Peace love and Light...Morning star
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/22/2008 |
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It is interesting that our lives are more similar than different. Except for loved ones, most are doomed the the anonymity of the flow of humanity from birth to death.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/22/2008 |
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Excellent Barbara
An outstanding piece
Love & peace
William |
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| Reviewed by Shedding Light |
6/20/2008 |
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This is very good ... with a spiritual message.
Harold M. Nash |
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| Reviewed by Ann Marquette |
6/19/2008 |
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Wonderful and I suspect you are talking about your own "love of your life" and family...
great write Barbara.
Love, ann |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
6/19/2008 |
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Karen said "Somewhere out there" is a beautiful person with a very passionate, loving heart and soul, I believe that would be you Barbara. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/19/2008 |
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Great write Barbara,, so many messages through out,, thanks :)
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/19/2008 |
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| Quite a lovely piece, and quite a lovely thought - somewhere out there |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
6/18/2008 |
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Wonderfully beautiful I enjoyed the way you presented from opening to conclusion. As "Somewhere Out There" happiness and love lies in wait for us all as we reach desparately to hold onto every fibre of it that we can, not to mention to treasure.
Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
6/18/2008 |
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A beautiful and excellent write my friend, very well written and touching I must say...enjoyed this much!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/18/2008 |
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Another brilliant poem that captures the essence of two souls through all the many facets of life as the clock ticks them on their way into infinity! Beautifuly done Barbara!
ET |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/18/2008 |
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"Somewhere out there" is a beautiful person with a very passionate, loving heart and soul....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/18/2008 |
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I like the format you've used for this poem. Another thing I like is how you give emotions life in the third verse, as they search for owners. That idea is unique and perfectly poetic! You tell the truth about time in a lovely way. Nicely pennned! Love and Hugs.
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/18/2008 |
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| We all face the onslaughts of time and age and what goes with it but we have to keep moving on until we reach our destination in heaven. |
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| Reviewed by Michael Jones |
6/18/2008 |
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| Hi Barbara, a retrospective write and very inspirational. The only time we have is the present and we must make days bright for one another even when the sun is not shinning. Words are alive and move hearts, uplift spirits, and we can soar the the uttermost parts of the galaxy by the mere use of words. Thank you, peace!!! |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/18/2008 |
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| Very enjoyable reading Barbara. Well done my friend. God bless. |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
6/18/2008 |
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| I thoroughly enjoyed this, Barbara. Twice. - gene. |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
6/18/2008 |
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Oh my ... this delightful and insightful poetic prose takes one on a souls journey through the eyes of the writer. Planting the proper seeds in this life, in good ground, will always produce something of worth later on. Be assured that you have been quite prolific in this mandate.
Blessings and Love ...
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
6/18/2008 |
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| Barbara, this poem makes me think of timelessness, and you've written a timeline of the average person's life. No matter who we are, where we are, or what we do, as you said, "time is ticking". |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/18/2008 |
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Wonderful and insightful! Thank you Barbara for sharing this!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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